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HisieLome
Joined: 17 Jan 2004 Reviews: 133
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Sun Apr 25, 2004 7:46 pm
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| I have reviewed this before, and it is still so hot.....You are too naughty! |
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Bev
Joined: 07 Feb 2004 Reviews: 10
Location: Toronto Canada
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Fri May 07, 2004 7:25 pm
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Just finished reading Chapter 10.
Wonderful! Should you write a follow up?
YES PLEASE! |
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Michelleb102
Joined: 18 Mar 2004 Reviews: 269
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Fri May 07, 2004 7:59 pm
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I've reviewed this on another board, so I figured I give my review here as well
Hottttt...I must say, my face kind of looked like this when I first read this story, but bye the end it looked more like this and this
Seriously, your detailed description of certain...uh...acts, was very impressive. You've done a wonderful job, and I REALLY REALLY hope that you decide to write a follow up.
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redlexus01
Joined: 05 Apr 2004 Reviews: 22
Location: Alabama
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Mon May 10, 2004 11:55 pm
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I would pay to read this...Wonderful writing....A follow-up chapter?....hell yes....Love the detailed description.
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Annie103

Joined: 25 Apr 2004 Reviews: 11
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Thu May 13, 2004 1:38 pm
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I've read it before and I'll read it again! 
Oh, and follow up good idea! |
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Mavyan

Joined: 01 Jun 2004 Reviews: 9
Location: N.E. England
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Sat Aug 28, 2004 11:47 am
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Excellent writing, the description was very detailed and your OC was gr8!
plz write follow up! |
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ArwenUndomiel

Joined: 13 Aug 2006 Reviews: 55
Location: Australia
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Mon Aug 21, 2006 8:56 am
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Love it!!!
PLEASE write a follow-up! |
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WhoaNellie

Joined: 21 Nov 2006 Reviews: 34
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Fri Nov 24, 2006 1:22 pm
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Wow, just wow. Every intention of just reading a chapter at a time went out the window at the realization that you had done this from both of their perspectives in alternating chapters. The give and take between them was perfect and you kept the eroticism building throughout the piece. Good bits of relaxed humor between them, a wonderful work of erotica.
Warmest Wishes,
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Xavilyn
Joined: 03 Apr 2005 Reviews: 4
Location: Maryland, USA
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Wed Feb 06, 2008 12:05 pm
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| Veeery nice. I like how you switched the povs, It had a nice effect on the over all story. Keep it up! |
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curiouswombat

Joined: 03 Jun 2008 Reviews: 249
Location: An island in the Gulf of Lhún
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Sat Jul 12, 2008 1:05 pm
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| **Fans self**.... goes to jump husband.... |
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