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HisieLome
Joined: 17 Jan 2004
Reviews: 133
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Sun Apr 25, 2004 7:46 pm

I have reviewed this before, and it is still so hot.....You are too naughty!
 
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Bev
Joined: 07 Feb 2004
Reviews: 10
Location: Toronto Canada
Fri May 07, 2004 7:25 pm

Just finished reading Chapter 10.
Wonderful! Should you write a follow up?
YES PLEASE!
 
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Michelleb102
Joined: 18 Mar 2004
Reviews: 269
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Fri May 07, 2004 7:59 pm

I've reviewed this on another board, so I figured I give my review here as well Very Happy smiley face
Hottttt...I must say, my face kind of looked like this Shocked smiley face when I first read this story, but bye the end it looked more like this Twisted Evil smiley face and this Very Happy smiley face

Seriously, your detailed description of certain...uh...acts, was very impressive. You've done a wonderful job, and I REALLY REALLY hope that you decide to write a follow up.

Michelle
 
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redlexus01
Joined: 05 Apr 2004
Reviews: 22
Location: Alabama
Mon May 10, 2004 11:55 pm

I would pay to read this...Wonderful writing....A follow-up chapter?....hell yes....Love the detailed description.
Cecilia
 
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Annie103

Joined: 25 Apr 2004
Reviews: 11
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Thu May 13, 2004 1:38 pm

I've read it before and I'll read it again! Twisted Evil smiley face

Oh, and follow up good idea!
 

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Mavyan

Joined: 01 Jun 2004
Reviews: 9
Location: N.E. England
Sat Aug 28, 2004 11:47 am

Excellent writing, the description was very detailed and your OC was gr8!

plz write follow up!
 
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ArwenUndomiel

Joined: 13 Aug 2006
Reviews: 55
Location: Australia
Mon Aug 21, 2006 8:56 am

Love it!!!

PLEASE write a follow-up!
 
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WhoaNellie

Joined: 21 Nov 2006
Reviews: 34
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Fri Nov 24, 2006 1:22 pm

Wow, just wow. Every intention of just reading a chapter at a time went out the window at the realization that you had done this from both of their perspectives in alternating chapters. The give and take between them was perfect and you kept the eroticism building throughout the piece. Good bits of relaxed humor between them, a wonderful work of erotica.

Warmest Wishes,
Whoa Nellie
 
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Xavilyn
Joined: 03 Apr 2005
Reviews: 4
Location: Maryland, USA
Wed Feb 06, 2008 12:05 pm

Veeery nice. I like how you switched the povs, It had a nice effect on the over all story. Keep it up!
 
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curiouswombat

Joined: 03 Jun 2008
Reviews: 249
Location: An island in the Gulf of Lhún
Sat Jul 12, 2008 1:05 pm

**Fans self**.... goes to jump husband....
 
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