Reviews for "The Forsaken"

Sat May 15, 2004 4:02 am

OK. I have been following this on aff, but I noticed there are no reviews here yet. This is absolutely a wonderful story!!! One of the best.

*Bows to the masta* This story is gaining immense depth. Your descrpitions of the network and explanations of where they have all been over time is great! It is wonderful how you are tying several of the stories together as well. I am so proud to have been part of this plot bunny.

AWWWW Poor E. Another wonderful chapter to a very promising story. It is wonderful to see this nurturing side of Shar and Haldir. E definitely went to the right place!!

Sam cracks me up. ADHD posterchild was precious. That "Who the hell are you" comment was so appropriate for her. She privdes the perfect amoutn of comic relief to this situation...ligthens things up a bit.

This story has amazing potential at the hands of such a gifted writer. I really enjoy all of your stories immensely. They are helping me through a lot of issues we have in common.

Poor E. Who could do such a thing? *cleans gun and looks around for sharp objects* Fear not people....We will be exacting revenge on his behalf. You know that, right? This was a painful chapter to read, but absolutely necessary to the story to understand what horrors he was subjected to.

In spite of the heat here in AZ, I now have goosebumps nearly head to toe after reading the second half of Torment in its entirety. It gives me the much-needed resolve to survive the next few months here. I could not have put this into words any better myself. Beautifully written. Perfect lyrics....as always. My nerves of steel, spine of Jell-O self is waiting not-so patiently to make my exit and.....believe me when I say that likely this song will be blaring on my stereo on repeat when I do leave.

MUSH WARNING: I thank you for being a friend and listening through all this crap. Its good to see it inspire such a wonderful story with enormous potential for offshoots. The lyrics you suggest are, as usual, right on the money!!!!

I seriously cannot wait until the next update! You are foretelling my future, so to speak.

You have such a way with words, it leaves me speachless. I rely on you to be my voice. I follow this story with eager anticipation.

Great face off with Shar and Janessa. Sam's character brings another interesting dimension to the story as well. (E forgives Sam for the bum comment.)

Tia - Tal

Thu Aug 05, 2004 2:28 pm

*sporting goosebumps head to toe* In spite of the preview of this chapter I got last night, I still have goosebumps reading it again this morning!!! You so captured everything just the way it was happening and the way it felt. The music is perfect....of course you know that, since you gave me the CD.

Of course, nobody writes elfsmut like Shanastay, so that was excellent as well. The 3-minute elf thing was great.

I'm so glad you finally found time to update this story which is so endearing to me.....especially right now. The way Erestor responded to Tia was so subtley wonderful!

Can't wait to see what's next....but I guess I will have to.

Talasi Very Happy smiley face

Thu Aug 05, 2004 8:47 pm

Yay! An update...finally Very Happy smiley face

I hope Tia can help Erestor...I feel so sorry for him. Please update soon, I can't wait to find out what happens in the new chapter. Very Happy smiley face

Tue Jun 21, 2005 9:56 am

I came accross this story after reading another of yours, and going looking for anything else you had posted. I've read everything you have posted here, and this is my favorite story. I'm hoping you'll be able to update on all of your stories (which are all on my watched list), but I'm looking forward to an update on this one the most. I love this story, and Erestor is one of my favorite characters. Please update something soon. Very Happy smiley face

Wed Sep 07, 2005 6:03 pm

Oh Please don't leave me in suspense Shocked smiley face

I gotta know more of what will happen next between Erestor and Tia. Oh please update soon!

Wed Dec 28, 2005 12:59 am

Need update. Need update now! Hurry!! Laughing smiley face

Sat Jun 09, 2007 2:13 am

Love, love, loving this. I'm glad I found it although I 'm sorry it took me so long. Over here in OZ on a crummy dial up and my fanfic addiction is most unsatisfied.

Thu Jul 12, 2007 11:44 pm

I was wondering if you had a chance to finish the story and have it posted somewhere else?Like ff.net under a different name or maybe a different site? I know this story isn't done. please finish it. Don't leave it hanging like some have and never came back to finish. We all want to read this story to completion.

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