Reviews for "Two Too Much to Handle?"
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DreadLadyFreya

Joined: 31 Mar 2004 Reviews: 76
Location: A fantasy world, with beach front property
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Mon Apr 05, 2004 2:37 am
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| Wow! *fans self with "FanFic for Dummies" book* Is it hot in here, or is it just the twins?! I must admit, as a pervy-man-fancier I hadn't really paid much attention to elves... I guess I'll just have to broaden my horizons. Well Done!!! |
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Rous

Joined: 20 Mar 2004 Reviews: 503
Location: Trying to stay below the radar
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Wed Apr 21, 2004 8:00 am
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Okay, I want an Elf. I did not just flush with heat. That was not just another piece of smut. That was very well done. I hope the night is not over yet.  |
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Talasi
Joined: 29 Mar 2004 Reviews: 116
Location: Haldir\'s Lap
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Thu Jul 29, 2004 2:02 am
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Well damn! Those 2 just can't stay out of trouble. *considers putting elves over knee for a spanking* Her reaction to waking up alone was very touching and absolutely justified.....though I can't blame those 2 for hiding in the bathroom when Glory started pounding on the door.
They will have to do some smooth talking to calm her down and reassure her. Then they need some serious make-up sex. (Don't waste your breath. I know I'm warped.) She has had a rough go and has gotten the shaft too many times (not literally). She should never have to wake up alone again like that.
Of course, as usual.....this was brilliant. I really like how you brought this aspect of self doubt and uncertainty into the situation. I definitely did not see it coming. The final anger was sort of surprising, but when put in context makes complete sense. I look forward to their grovelling and how they make it up to her.
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Talasi
Joined: 29 Mar 2004 Reviews: 116
Location: Haldir\'s Lap
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Sat Apr 02, 2005 12:56 am
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Is it hot in here? *looking serious* I'm feeling very warm. *looks at Shana*
Yay!!! *does happy dance* Twinsmut....wonderful, delicious, loverly twinsmut! It's good to see more of this. I missed the twins. 
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treymaine
Joined: 29 Jun 2004 Reviews: 1
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Sun Apr 03, 2005 9:16 am
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Sorry that real life has intruded on you, but I am sooo happy that you updated. |
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scotchleaf
Joined: 22 Dec 2004 Reviews: 32
Location: looking over the mirrormere
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Sat Apr 30, 2005 11:08 pm
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OMG...what a fic Janessa is one lucky lady (must find myself a set of twins)
please keep updating  |
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