Reviews for "The Phoenix's Griffin"

Thu May 06, 2004 6:37 am

Got to chapter 13. I must say, I am not disappointed. Thanks.

Sat May 08, 2004 12:06 pm

Up to chapter 13. Great battle scene! You've captured the desperation of those who watch their loved ones go into danger.

Sun May 09, 2004 9:51 am

The original characters, the setting and the society that the author creates are compelling and very believable. The story is both interesting and well told. There's way more here than the average fan fiction.

Fri May 21, 2004 5:35 am

Up to fifteen. How is that. Did you get through the knife fight yet???? LOL

Sat May 22, 2004 11:20 am

I finished it. And my popcorn is soggy, no thanks to you. Very well done. I heard a rumour that there is a sequel. Do not lay the rumour to rest. Make it so. How went the knife fight?
Oh, yes, still with the comma thing, but it is not obnoxious! LOL

Mon May 24, 2004 2:26 pm

Is the sequel finished yet? Okay, now. I am waiting for new postings. And not patiently.

Sun Aug 01, 2004 1:16 pm

Well, this story is just gorgeous. I've read all 23 chapters thrice and loved every moment. So, 'thank you' is very inadequate.

It along with the rest of the Phaila/Amaras/Rohme saga could pretty easily be deTolkien'd and stand alone as a book. Hmmmm

It says it's a WIP, but seems finished?? Although, I can't imagine Haldir doing anything except fading....... Cry smiley face

Fri Dec 17, 2004 3:02 pm

OMG! This was the best story!!! I totally loved this story! It was just gripping. The history of the Rohme, not to mention the OC's Amaras and Phaila was fascinating. I haven't read your other stories yet so I thought this story stood well on it's. You really brought out the visuals well, the beauty of the court, Phaila's home, and the horror of the battles. I love also how you characterized Haldir, he was very strong, yet I really felt for him during this journey.

Is this the very end of this story? Is there an epilogue? I would love to read of Amaras' and Phaila's reunion, and Haldir getting home. I've put this story on my watched stories just in case. =)

You are a wonderful writer. Thank you for this memorable read! I will be watching for more stories from you! Very Happy smiley face

Sat Jan 08, 2005 2:57 pm

I am fairly new to this site and to LOTR fan fiction so I consider myself very lucky indeed to have stumbled upon your stories so soon. What a fantastic imagination you have! I feel as though there is no compliment that I can give nor anything I can say in a review that an awsomely talented writer such as yourself has not already heard at least twice so, I will simply say that I am enjoying this story immensely and look forward to reading the others as well.

Mon May 23, 2005 10:46 am

Hey, great story, liked it a lot. However, your Hungarian lines are in need of some correction... there are some typos, and some words are not suffixed properly (for example "férj", one would not say that, rather férjem - my husband- or férjuram -my lord husband-, or some endearment. )
But otherwise, I liked it a lot.

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