Reviews for "Heart of a Warden"

Sat Apr 17, 2004 9:41 am

It's beautiful! I can't wait for more! I turly love it! My only comment is that till half-way in the 3rd chapter, you spelled Orophin's name "Orophan". Other than that, I love it, so keep writing! Very Happy smiley face

Sat Apr 17, 2004 10:42 am

This is just fabulous! Your descriptions are so beautiful. I can't believe you've been keeping this to yourself! Wave smiley face

Great work, give us more!

~Nienna~
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Sat Apr 17, 2004 10:47 am

Wow... not bad... is this a romance fic?

Sat Apr 17, 2004 1:49 pm

Oh moonlight thank you for pointing that out. I fixed it. My Beta missed it too. Heh. And thanks all for the nice reviews so far. I will update as soon as the next chapter is beta'd
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Amy L

Sun Apr 18, 2004 4:00 am

I love chapter 4! He's so confused, hehehe.... I have an evil streak for loving to turn people's lives upside-down! Your descriptions are really good, but be careful that they don't take over too much and make us forget the plot! Anyway, I love this story, so keep writing! Very Happy smiley face

Sun Apr 18, 2004 4:02 am

Just one last detail, on chapter 1, you named it chapte1. Is that normal or just a typo? Anyway, keep writing! Very Happy smiley face

Sun Apr 18, 2004 2:37 pm

Hey Amy its Kika! Just thought I'd drop by and give your beautiful fic a review cause it most definitely deserves it! I LOVE it and am anxiously awaiting the next chapter! Laughing smiley face

Sun Apr 18, 2004 5:43 pm

AMY!! this is one great story, I love the descriptions and the character you bhave given each. Cannot wait for more.

Hugs! Keep up the goodn work.

Mon Apr 19, 2004 2:23 pm

Eee! More, please?

Tue Apr 20, 2004 5:28 pm

Off to a wonderful start! He is so confused. he he Please write more. Very Happy smiley face

Talasi
Resident Haldir Worshiper and Wanton Elfbanger Very Happy smiley face

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