Reviews for "Heart of a Warden"

Sat Apr 24, 2004 5:45 am

It's wonderful! He seems to be in love even earlier... Wink smiley face

! Anyway, I love it, so keep writing! Very Happy smiley face

Mon Apr 26, 2004 3:11 am

ACK! I can't believe you didn't want to post this! This is a wonderfully rich story, the characters complex and descriptions vivid! I love how confused Rumil is...heh heh Twisted Evil smiley face

it's gotta be payback for all the teasing he's given to Hal! Loved it!!
Luv, Mei *bounce*
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~keeper of Dinendal's shiny lip gloss~

Mon Apr 26, 2004 1:24 pm

This is so great! I love it...... the characters personalities are well thought out and you have a captivating use of backflash! Keep writing! You did a great job at describing Rumil's feelings... he's so confused! Ha! Lol... Very Happy smiley face

Mona
Your #1 fan!

Thu Apr 29, 2004 11:52 am

It's wonderful! I'm so happy that she's better..... Poor Rumil though! He can't even figure out that he's in love! I can't wait for her to awake....... *sighs*.... please update soon! Very Happy smiley face

Mona,
Your #1 fan

Thu Apr 29, 2004 2:13 pm

*squeals with happiness* Lovies! More pwease?

Thu Apr 29, 2004 2:16 pm

I'm so happy her fever has broken. That outrider had better show up soon! I can't believe Rumil doesn't realize he is in love. I can't wait to see if the feelings are returned.

Update soon!
Talasi

Fri May 07, 2004 6:26 am

So wonderful! She woke up! Well, the only comment, once again, Orophin's name was spelt Orophan...

Update soon!
Mona
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Fri May 07, 2004 9:02 am

Monaleoht,
again my appologies. Beta's missed it too. Sigh....It seems I am doomed to spell his name wrong. It is kind of funny how I do it about every other time. It is all fixed now. Thank you for catching it yet again. THanks for your lovely reviews as well. You are so nice. I think If I write an Orophin fic I will have to be doubly cautious. LOL.

Also thank you so much everyone else for your kind words and praise. It means so much to me that you all are liking this story.
Hugs
Amy L

Fri May 07, 2004 3:02 pm

I caught up with this one finally. I really like the female warden and seeing her training and day-to-day life. I'm relieved to know her feelings for Rumil seem to be returned! I loooved seeing tender, comforting Rumil- awww! I'm a little concerned for her leg- is it possible she'll lose it, even if he gets her to help soon? Nice suspense and the flashback structure worked nicely woven in and out of her delirium.

I look forward to seeing where Dara will be headed next. I hope she's on the mend soon!

Cheers,
Amy B.

Sat May 15, 2004 3:39 pm

Yay! Rumil has some feelings for her, it seems! Now you just have to get these two stubborn people together. I love how seeing her hurt brought out the protective feelings in him.

I hope she gets to the healers soon. It doesn't sound too good for her leg! Will it be too late and will they need to amputate it? Eek!

Cheers,
Amy B.

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