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wiz
Joined: 22 Jan 2004
Reviews: 6
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Mon Apr 19, 2004 5:11 pm
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Oh, yeah!!! Aibreán is putting her wonderful story for ALL to read.
I've read this story on another site and absolutely love it.
At the end of the movie 'Return of the King' when Frodo goes to the Grey Havens, I was not saddened that he was leaving. I knew he had a life and love to look forward to in Valinor.
You are going to really enjoy this story. |
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RonsGal
Joined: 22 Jan 2004
Reviews: 17
Location: Calif
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Tue Apr 20, 2004 10:23 am
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I too, have read this story elsewhere, and it gave me much joy, with a bit of sorrow for poor dear Frodo! I wished for Frodo to find peace and happiness, and when we last see him in ROTK his beautiful smile is what I thought of while reading this story.
And the part if him being self consious of his nine fingered hand was very well done. He was uncomfortable about it with Cara, because she is female, but not with Figwit. That told us alot right there. I liked that part, but it did make me sad for Frodo all over again.
You will enjoy this tale very much, for Cara has as beautiful a heart as does Frodo. I will watch this story along with you because its good enough to read over and over. |
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Novedhelion
Joined: 04 Sep 2003
Reviews: 42
Location: NC
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Tue Apr 20, 2004 1:45 pm
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I adore this story! Looking forward to more of Frodo in Valinor...I hope he's finally happy there!
Please keep up the good work! |
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samgalvao
Joined: 21 Jan 2004
Reviews: 3
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Wed Apr 21, 2004 8:13 am
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| Great story ! I absolutely love the idea that we get to know what happened to Frodo and Valinor. Wonderful writting, great new characters. Looking forward to more ! |
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RonsGal
Joined: 22 Jan 2004
Reviews: 17
Location: Calif
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Thu Apr 22, 2004 2:48 pm
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Chapter 4... what a great chapter!
The dream was wonderful and I wanted him to kiss her so much!
Go Frodo!!
ANd when did you say chapter 5 would be up????????
 we need more story!
Rons Gal Sal |
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Sorcia
Joined: 16 Jan 2004
Reviews: 80
Location: Gods, Sean in glasses, how dishy
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Tue Apr 27, 2004 2:54 pm
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What a lovely read, the story is building nicely, many different paths for you to follow! Please keep writing as Frodo needs some happy moments  |
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Vendie
Joined: 01 May 2004
Reviews: 59
Location: Iowa, USA
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Sat May 01, 2004 4:40 pm
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| I love this story! I've been reading it for a while and I can't wait to read the next chapter! |
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Novedhelion
Joined: 04 Sep 2003
Reviews: 42
Location: NC
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Mon May 03, 2004 9:47 am
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Very sweet - I love the sword. It's a nice touch! I've been trying to look up a meaning for the name in the Entymologies but all I have so far is that the first part means "tough" or "strong". Does the name Tarfinion have a meaning? Just curious....
Keep going! It's a delightful change to read about Valinor! |
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Kementari1
Joined: 23 Jan 2004
Reviews: 7
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Fri May 07, 2004 3:10 am
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Brava, Brava, Bard Aibreán!!! What a lovely story this is, and has made me even more appreciative of Frodo, if that's possible. 
Keep up the good work, and send more Open Scrolls' way  !!! |
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RonsGal
Joined: 22 Jan 2004
Reviews: 17
Location: Calif
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Fri May 07, 2004 3:00 pm
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Just finished Chapter 9.... (I know, I know, I'm behind times! But I've been so busy!!) Anyway... I totally loved this chapter! So sweet and so rewarding for Frodo to be relieved of the pain associated with the failure he felt! It must have been heart wrenching for him to carry that burden!
Bless your heart for giving us Frodo & Cara... if anyone in Middle Earth deserves LOVE its Frodo!! Not to mention a lovely afternoon spent in the shade with a lovely elfmaid!
Go Frodo!!!
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