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greenlingers1
Joined: 21 Mar 2004
Reviews: 15
Location: california
Sat Apr 24, 2004 7:12 pm

a most intriguing prologue..... Confused smiley face: .......i am anticipating for this tale to be revealed.....i think it will probably surprise us all......don't keep us intriguing minds wondering........please update... Surprised smiley face
 
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Monaleoht
Joined: 02 Mar 2004
Reviews: 352
Location: I travel with the wind, as free as an eagle soaring the great firmament above Arda
Sun Apr 25, 2004 6:13 am

Very nice. My only comment - try to put a space between paragraphs = it makes it easier to read! Wink smiley face I can't wait for the story to develop, so keep writing! Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face
 
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Miluiwen

Joined: 17 Apr 2004
Reviews: 8
Location: London
Tue Apr 27, 2004 12:24 pm

Thanks for your kind remarks, I've just started writing chapter one, but it's quite hard to know where to start! It will be sent off to my great beta as soon as possible.
I changed the paragraph spacing, so now, hopefully, the Prog will be easier to read. And the weird spelling thing, with the weird characters. Ah well, hopefully they'll be gone for good...
Love,
Mil
 
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Concetta

Joined: 22 Mar 2004
Reviews: 25
Location: Maryland, USA
Fri Apr 30, 2004 10:37 pm

It's not bad! I think that it is a very well written prolouge, very eloquent. Hope to read more soon!
 
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eokat
Joined: 27 Jan 2004
Reviews: 31
Location: England
Fri May 07, 2004 5:33 pm

Lovely beginning, hope you will continue with this. Looking forward to seeing her meet Eomer. Eokat. Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face
 
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Monaleoht
Joined: 02 Mar 2004
Reviews: 352
Location: I travel with the wind, as free as an eagle soaring the great firmament above Arda
Thu May 13, 2004 2:58 pm

PLEASE, PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!! Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face
 
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Miluiwen

Joined: 17 Apr 2004
Reviews: 8
Location: London
Mon May 31, 2004 3:29 pm

I know, lol. No UPDATE! I reprimand myself. RL has had its ups and downs, and so I have been pulled away from my computer- only to return to it in very short bursts to check e-mails.
Thank you so much for your kind reviews- they are being sucked in by my Review-Hoover- and it has motivated me to get punching those keyboard keys again. I have had writer's block for such a long time- but now it has decided to bugger off and I have got more ideas in my head.
I just hope that your anticipation will be fulfilled fully by Chapter 1!
Many thanks,
Millie
 
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Monaleoht
Joined: 02 Mar 2004
Reviews: 352
Location: I travel with the wind, as free as an eagle soaring the great firmament above Arda
Thu Jun 10, 2004 1:24 pm

A wonderful new chapter! Perhaps a little slow in starting, but I can't wait for the adventure to start! *sits back and relaxes* so bring it on! Please, please update soon! Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face Very Happy smiley face
 
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