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marcia

Joined: 10 Jun 2004
Reviews: 53
Location: California
Tue Jun 28, 2005 5:55 pm

Hi Havetoist,

SOPHIA says hello Wave smiley face Wave smiley face

and sends you her favorite dragon.

Magician smiley face

Love,
Marcia
 
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Ingole
Joined: 11 Apr 2004
Reviews: 36
Location: Washington State, USA
Fri Jul 29, 2005 11:30 pm

“I cannot believe him so treacherous, after all of this time.”
“Rohmë.”
“Cousin.”
“Maeglin.”
“Point taken.”

The plot thickens...This is, as we say in the biz, the hook. That teetering brink...that explosion waiting for the lighting of the fuse. Driving me crazy. And again, perfect.
 
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Ingole
Joined: 11 Apr 2004
Reviews: 36
Location: Washington State, USA
Thu Sep 08, 2005 10:54 pm

Finally, the return of Sorfilia. And what a return! From Valinor, no less. Liked the physical manifestation of the spellwork.

Also thoroughly enjoyed the sense of earthquake magnitude power from Helywanwen at the battle. Complete with literary aftershocks. (those grisly, unlovely, true-to-battle wounds.)

And Pelion. Cool, ironic Pelion. Have enjoyed this subtle, multi-layered character from the first, but this little scenelet speaks volumes. The fact that he shows up so quickly to check on Phaila...The wry-humor manner that no doubt camouflages the alarm beneath (exactly what was needed by both Phaila and Amaras at that point.)

The banquet continues. Now needing more Sorfilia, more Lorand...and more Pelion. Anytime soon is fine...
 
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Crispin
Joined: 16 Sep 2005
Reviews: 9
Location: Maryland
Wed Sep 21, 2005 6:34 pm

Wonderful story ! Finally, something worth reading. I especially like the way you switch back and forth between the couples .
 
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Crispin
Joined: 16 Sep 2005
Reviews: 9
Location: Maryland
Tue Nov 22, 2005 6:44 pm

God I love this story ! I look forward to getting emails telling me it's been updated !
 
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flowingrace
Joined: 17 Apr 2005
Reviews: 27
Location: Between the land of the living and the land of the dead
Mon Jan 02, 2006 9:49 pm

I do love your story! It's written so beautifully and the characters are all different and believeable. I love Isong! There was no sleep for a night and two extremely crappy papers that were turned in last month because I spent all of it reading the entire story! So~o good!
And Malta wanting 8 kids! Haha! ^.^ I can't wait for another update! Very Happy smiley face Also waiting for Lorand and his story to come out!
 
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Crispin
Joined: 16 Sep 2005
Reviews: 9
Location: Maryland
Sat Apr 01, 2006 10:06 am

God, I love this story ! It's like getting a gift when notified by email that there is an update ! Can't get enough of it. I dearly would like to see this go on and on , and on ! Please !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
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marcia

Joined: 10 Jun 2004
Reviews: 53
Location: California
Wed Apr 26, 2006 11:57 am

Hi Havetoist!

Sophie and Grammie are sending you a little hello replete with:
Hiding behind the sofa smiley face Broccoli smiley face Carrot smiley face Angel smiley face Wave smiley face Machine Gun smiley face Beer smiley face
 
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marcia

Joined: 10 Jun 2004
Reviews: 53
Location: California
Wed Apr 26, 2006 8:55 pm

Hi, Just read ch 107 and loved it! Beautiful flow and the ending stole my breath. So elegant and dignified and done with such restraint of language. Kudos.
 
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Crispin
Joined: 16 Sep 2005
Reviews: 9
Location: Maryland
Thu Apr 27, 2006 8:28 am

Love it ! This is the only story in all of the fan fic I've read that makes any sense ! Look forward to more !
Crispin
 
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