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5292165
Joined: 29 Dec 2006
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Wed Oct 17, 2007 9:36 am
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Can you see the smiling faces of your devoted readers?
For me, the battle "games" are a ominous premonition of what's to come...although I really was hoping Nilfin's sword would find its way into Tihamer's belly. (for real)! My distain for this seditionary grows with each chapter, as does my annoyance with Lorand for being so callow.
Nilfin in love is a much gentler Rohme than Nilfin the bachelor... and it's nice to see this side of him. Huril, of course, is becoming a favorite! You have such a talent for adding little nuances to his speech and behavior that truly define his character. Thank you for giving us this chapter. |
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5292165
Joined: 29 Dec 2006
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Tue Feb 05, 2008 11:31 pm
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| I almost feel guilty writing this. Have you given this up for good? I can understand so well the pressures of writing...much less a story where people are constantly looking for updates. Say the word that you are done and I will move on. (..and probably imagine how this all ends up). But it won't be as good, or pleasurable or complete as you can do it. What a monumental task trying to pull it all together for a ..."final chapter". What can I say? I will be heartbroken if you don't finish this. But I will understand. Thanks for all you have given us. |
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nimloth22
Joined: 29 Dec 2006
Reviews: 5
Location: Armenelos
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Thu Feb 07, 2008 2:42 pm
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...thank you so much for that chapter.. ..It was fabulous!!!...ohhh...I must say that Neril and Ildiko are so adorable and innocent,that part of the chapter when they were saying goodbye was lovely.
...ooh..-And Elyril is turning in one of my favorites characters ..He is so sweet as uncle =)
....Excellent chapter...
.... nimloth ....
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5292165
Joined: 29 Dec 2006
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Fri Feb 08, 2008 2:02 am
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| It was the best part of my day to log on and see you posted a new chapter. I am reading it slowly. Enjoying every bit. Will finish in a day or two. Thank you so much! |
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5292165
Joined: 29 Dec 2006
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Thu Feb 14, 2008 12:56 am
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| Absolutely beautiful! Elyril's long awaited return...I could just imagine the years of suffering for Amaras and Phaila wondering if he still lived. How touching Phaila pulling the blanket up over her son, with only the nose exposed. There were so many special images, I know I will have to reread the whole chapter. Thank you again. |
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Ingole
Joined: 11 Apr 2004
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Sun Feb 24, 2008 2:17 am
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Elves - "veins of rare ore, gems among stone of man..."
The One Ring - "It waits for legs to bear it once more toward its master."
On the gathering of mushrooms - "...my daggar, should a mushroom give quarrel."
Love this rare voice - the same voice that gave us the image of untapped wrath in butterflies. This chapter goes in so many directions - political intrigue (the treasure ship incident is perfectly crafted and deliciously in Rohme character), historical exposition, development of new characters, multiple plots and adventurous side-trips cooking on several fronts - that it reads like The Odyssey...or, like Tolkien. <<smiles>> Feasting on anticipation. Onward, Havetoist. |
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5292165
Joined: 29 Dec 2006
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Thu May 01, 2008 11:53 pm
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| Almost 3 months. Are we getting close to another posting? Maybe? Even a short one? |
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5292165
Joined: 29 Dec 2006
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Sat Jul 26, 2008 11:29 pm
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| Damn! I had always hoped this story would be completed. Thank you for all the lush words, intricate plots, vibrant character, heart throbbing sex and heart breaking emotions. Maybe it was never meant to have an ending... except in the reader's imagination. It was a wild ride and I enjoyed it all. |
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nimloth22
Joined: 29 Dec 2006
Reviews: 5
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Sat Aug 23, 2008 3:45 pm
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...can we still hope for a update?..
...please... |
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5292165
Joined: 29 Dec 2006
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Thu Aug 28, 2008 6:49 pm
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Yes, yes! And the voyage continues. Do not worry about a Beta. The only mistake I caught is that you transposed Neril's and Nilfin's names twice. I think you meant to have Nerl gave Ildiko the small bag of polished stones. When the letter came with the declaration of war, I'm sure it was Nilfin who spoke of the king having manners.
Any other errors were not even noticed becasue I was so thrilled to see your posting. I love the interactions of Amaras with his sons and now grandson. You have made the day, week and month of many readers. Thanks. |
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