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AzureDragoness

Joined: 11 Jan 2004 Reviews: 183
Location: Greater Metropolitan Area of the District of Columbia
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Sat May 01, 2004 8:53 pm
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Dude........ I love this! Pleasepleaseplease, more ! |
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LuthienTinuviel
Joined: 29 Dec 2003 Reviews: 312
Location: Dancing in the clouds.
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Sat May 01, 2004 11:30 pm
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| Wow... not bad... |
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Anna

Joined: 29 Jan 2004 Reviews: 108
Location: Sweden
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Sun May 02, 2004 2:34 pm
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This is VERY intriguing, indeed. I´m definitely hooked!
Gimme more!!! I know, I´m terribly demanding...  |
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ElenaTiriel

Joined: 17 Mar 2004 Reviews: 132
Location: The Grey Havens
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Sat May 08, 2004 2:21 pm
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| I was just looking at your last chapters, to determine if I wanted to read the whole story... Were you aware that the last chapter is a repeat of the prior one? Thought you'd like to know... |
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ElenaTiriel

Joined: 17 Mar 2004 Reviews: 132
Location: The Grey Havens
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Tue May 11, 2004 1:05 am
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You're welcome. But, unfortunately, now chapters 7 and 8 are the same...
Ah, the joys of technology...  |
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ElenaTiriel

Joined: 17 Mar 2004 Reviews: 132
Location: The Grey Havens
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Fri May 14, 2004 3:48 pm
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Thanks for straightening out the chapters! Yes, I am reading the story, and like little Ela.
Her preparations for her funeral in the last chapter -- lots of cats! -- were really funny. As Elrond said, *somebody* sure has a flair for the dramatic! |
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Rous

Joined: 20 Mar 2004 Reviews: 503
Location: Trying to stay below the radar
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Fri May 14, 2004 7:29 pm
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ElenaTiriel said
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> Her preparations for her funeral in the last chapter -- lots of cats! -- were really funny. As Elrond said, *somebody* sure has a flair for the dramatic!
I am trying to use the things my kids and the nanachild say in situations. Life is so much more creative than fiction. I hope it is working. Ela is kinda a mix of all my kids. So you can imagine that I have LOTS of material. |
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Mei

Joined: 25 Apr 2004 Reviews: 8
Location: San Diego CA
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Sun May 23, 2004 12:48 pm
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OMG, I'm hooked. I love little Ela--and she says the most ingenuous things! I can hardly wait to find out her parentage. Love her interactions with everyone, especially the odd understanding she has with Haldir and how she keeps calling Elrohir 'elf'. More more more please, with a chocolate covered elf on top??  |
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AzureDragoness

Joined: 11 Jan 2004 Reviews: 183
Location: Greater Metropolitan Area of the District of Columbia
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Sun May 23, 2004 7:52 pm
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Lovely!!! I need moremoremore, and the er the better!
*gets out her cheerleading squad: * |
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kinvara
Joined: 18 Feb 2004 Reviews: 58
Location: middle of nowhere, dorset
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Tue May 25, 2004 8:16 am
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I love this it is very simple and then there are all the m ind boggling questions that come at one time. Very well written and i can't wait for more.  |
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