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Rous

Joined: 20 Mar 2004
Reviews: 503
Location: Trying to stay below the radar
Mon May 03, 2004 12:04 pm

Although most definately not canon, I loved it. Your summary caught my attention, because it confused me. So I decided to read the story. Glad I did! Well written. I wish you could have drawn it out longer. Not a critisism, just a desire to read more. I shall await more. Try it again. LOL

Rous
 
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Monaleoht
Joined: 02 Mar 2004
Reviews: 352
Location: I travel with the wind, as free as an eagle soaring the great firmament above Arda
Mon May 03, 2004 1:01 pm

As Rous mentioned, it was the summary that caught me off guard! I loved it! It was well written - elegant, charming and the words seemed to flow across the page... *sighs* really beautiful!
 
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Viv

Joined: 25 Apr 2003
Reviews: 673
Location: Texas
Mon May 03, 2004 2:48 pm

I'm fairly confused. Could you include a note at the beginning saying exactly what AU premise the story is based on? Every time I thought I had it figured out, there'd be a line and I would realize I must've missed something crucial. I don't mind AUs, but my brain is bubbly sometimes, and I really need to know what's bein AU'd in advance. Sorry for being so fluff-headed!
 
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Erinalor
Joined: 28 Apr 2004
Reviews: 5
Location: Alabama
Wed May 05, 2004 8:09 pm

I thoroughly enjoyed this. I think it would make a great AU story. I'd enjoy the early years with Aragorn as Captain of the Guard and his eventual marriage to this wife. Then more on her by the sea and the homecoming this focuses on. Delightful, give us more! You have a very nice style.
 
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