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Moralanqua

Joined: 12 May 2003
Reviews: 167
Location: Scotland
Tue May 11, 2004 11:53 am

Oh! You got me! I love vamp fics and so far, this one is quality. Faye is great and the whole scenario is believable. Im hoping you keep this flow.

One thing: PLEASE dont be turning Arwen into a vampire. That would be so disappointing and way off canon to be accepted!

Im watching this story - its getting too good to miss.
 
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Moralanqua

Joined: 12 May 2003
Reviews: 167
Location: Scotland
Tue May 11, 2004 9:54 pm

You update fast, we likes that! Very Happy smiley face

Watch the moderinisms coming from the elves ie "pretty bad" from Arwen. Its dont sound right.

I find Faye ever more intersting and you really are doing a great job with her characterisation.
 
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Mija
Joined: 18 Mar 2004
Reviews: 16
Location: 
Sun May 16, 2004 1:36 am

Very well done. The descriptions of Faye fighting for the children was heart wrenching. Wonderful job
 
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ladyrheena
Joined: 18 Jan 2004
Reviews: 44
Location: Humming in the corner.
Mon May 17, 2004 10:05 am

Ooooh. Very good. I was iffy at first but you pleasantly surprised me. Is there going to be a continuation of Faye's tale? Hope so, and look forward to it!
 
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snowdrop
Joined: 29 Oct 2004
Reviews: 32
Location: 
Tue Feb 22, 2005 6:23 pm

lovely! cant wait for more! Smile smiley face
 
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JadwigaArda
Joined: 07 May 2004
Reviews: 28
Location: West of the Misty Mountains
Mon Apr 11, 2005 4:38 pm

Excellent story. A original plot with well developed characters - and a interesting twist to vampire legends to combine with Midle-earth. So true that children see the good (and bad)in people much more easily than adults. Found your story due to story of the day and I am glad that I satisfied my curiousity!

Jadwiga
 
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MarzBar
Joined: 23 Jun 2005
Reviews: 132
Location: Queensland, Australia
Sat Sep 17, 2005 12:45 pm

Lovely story about Arwen and a new friend and protector.
 
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Cuthalion

Joined: 10 Jul 2004
Reviews: 79
Location: Germany
Mon Mar 20, 2006 6:21 am

Interesting tale, but (as another reviewer said) you should watch out for modernisms that don't belong to Middle Earth. I don't think any Elf would say "Okay"!
 
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LuthienTinuviel
Joined: 29 Dec 2003
Reviews: 312
Location: Dancing in the clouds.
Thu Aug 31, 2006 10:14 pm

I've loved this story for awhile, though I never seem to have time to appreciate you for writing it. You've managed to weave two concepts (Tolkien and vampires) together, which is believable to boot! Pat yourself for a job well done!
 
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