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ladyrheena
Joined: 18 Jan 2004 Reviews: 44
Location: Humming in the corner.
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Sun Jun 20, 2004 7:15 am
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| This just keeps getting better and better! Your mastery of the prose style is awesome, and the way you describe the fading of the Eldar with the mellyrn being replaced by beech and oak trees...wow. |
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ladyrheena
Joined: 18 Jan 2004 Reviews: 44
Location: Humming in the corner.
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Sat Jun 26, 2004 12:12 pm
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Awww noooo! Yes, we knew it would happen but oh...and written so beautifully. Well done. I like the way Malawen goes to him for comfort, as though now they have at least one real thing in common...
So good! Is that the end? |
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jodancingtree
Joined: 11 Jan 2004 Reviews: 8
Location: usa
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Sat Jun 26, 2004 2:42 pm
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Ah, no, Ladyrheena, that surely is not the end! Arwen commanded him to go to Rivendell, and then on to the Shire, you know...
I'm glad you liked this chapter, though. Thanks for reviewing.
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AzureDragoness

Joined: 11 Jan 2004 Reviews: 183
Location: Greater Metropolitan Area of the District of Columbia
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Sun Jun 27, 2004 5:31 pm
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| Good, not the end..... I love this story too much to let it end there! Oh, I hope the next part will be soon! |
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jodancingtree
Joined: 11 Jan 2004 Reviews: 8
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Sun Jun 27, 2004 8:20 pm
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I'm so glad you love it, AzureDragoness! Ok, I just put up 2 more chapters - now I'm leaving for a week's vacation, but I'll try to do some writing as we travel, so maybe I'll have another one to post when we get back....
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ladyrheena
Joined: 18 Jan 2004 Reviews: 44
Location: Humming in the corner.
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Tue Jun 29, 2004 9:38 am
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YAY! Not the end!
Hope there is more. Much, much more. I (almost) cried at your description of Arwen's death and burial. Very poetic, very Tolkien. And what will happen in the North, I wonder? Here's begging for another update ASAP! |
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AzureDragoness

Joined: 11 Jan 2004 Reviews: 183
Location: Greater Metropolitan Area of the District of Columbia
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Tue Jun 29, 2004 11:51 am
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Yay, vacation! *grins* I hope you enjoy yourself, and get some writing done as well I can't WAIT for more of this story!! Well, later  |
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ladyrheena
Joined: 18 Jan 2004 Reviews: 44
Location: Humming in the corner.
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Fri Jul 16, 2004 8:51 am
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Still good. Your portrayal of the evolving relationship between Malawen and Canhando is lovely, very heartfelt and quite realistic (if indeed anything with orcs and elves can be considered realistic... )
Next update? Pwetty pwease? |
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jodancingtree
Joined: 11 Jan 2004 Reviews: 8
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Fri Oct 01, 2004 8:35 pm
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{sigh} I wonder if anyone is still reading this... is it worthwhile to keep posting it here? But I hate to leave a story unfinished on a site, once I've started. I guess I push on, in hopes that someone is reading, even if not reviewing...
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LucyTia
Joined: 16 Mar 2004 Reviews: 16
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Mon Dec 27, 2004 11:54 pm
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Wow! I stumbled across this story when you last updated and then went back and read your other two before continuing.
Just wonderful. Your characterisation is well thought out and very touching. I really love the continuing themes of redemption and reconcilliation. We need more of that sort of thing in the real world ... right now.
I don't usually read hobbit-centric fics for some reason, but you may just have converted me.
Please keep going with this engaging, endearing tale.
Cheers and thanks so much. |
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