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Elentari
Joined: 13 May 2003
Reviews: 244
Location: Lost in elven dreams...
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Wed May 12, 2004 7:30 am
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Whoa! Lokks who finds his way into our lil' nuthouse! Maeglor and Browny!
I loved reading this over at HASA and FF.net and I am very, very, VERY glad to see you brought this piece here. It's a jewel among the oh-so-[mis]used elf-on-modern-settings thread. .... ah, even though most people around here must have seen this before as well, I won't spoil the surprise.
It's flawless. |
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Rapunzel
Joined: 29 Jan 2004
Reviews: 21
Location: Boston, MA
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Wed May 12, 2004 2:54 pm
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| I was really impressed with this chapter, and curious about Maglor's story, since I have not read The Simarrillion yet. I looked him up at the Encyclopedia of Arda, and I must say, this is quite a fitting setting for a story of the last son of Feanor. Wandering the world, never going near his homeland again. How sad and eloquent. I'm intrigued. Can't wait to see what happens! |
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Andreth
Joined: 25 Oct 2003
Reviews: 107
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Wed May 12, 2004 9:26 pm
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Jillian I am so happy to see that you've decided to post this story over here. It's a wonderful story and I was very glad to hear that Maglor has been actively muse-ing for you again. Tell him I'm eagerly awaiting that scantily clad painting scene. 
You do an excellent job of characterizing Maglor and I can't wait to see more of the story. |
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Mara
Joined: 18 May 2004
Reviews: 3
Location: Spain
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Mon May 24, 2004 1:09 pm
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I read this story on FF.net a few time ago, and although I took it with some skepticism -- I´m one of those who doesn´t believe at all in ME being the far past of our world  --, I admit that it was an unexpected surprise.
I liked the way you portray Maglor: lonely, sad, regretful, and weary of this word, but still hoping in the deepest of his heart. The last Feänorian needs desesperately a way to redemption. And someone to tell him it´s time to forgive himself.
I´m intrigued to see how it ends 
Mara |
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miriel361
Joined: 11 Jun 2003
Reviews: 103
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Wed May 26, 2004 1:21 pm
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| Hmm, everyone seems to know more than I do. Is there more to this story? If so, I'd like to read it. |
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Jillian
Joined: 13 May 2003
Reviews: 89
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Fri May 28, 2004 4:21 am
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I appreciate those who do what will happen next (especially Andreth, who knows The End) not spoiling this for others.
The End is a long way off, with many, many happenings yet. Also, I'm stoked by those reading who haven't read The Silm, trust me, as the story continues you'll find out more about Maglor than you want to know *smiles*
Thank you all for the reviews. |
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