Reviews for "Twilight Thunder"

Wed May 19, 2004 7:48 pm

Ack! Nonono, don't stop there!! *sobs* I need to know how this turns out....... more please, soon?

Fri May 21, 2004 2:43 pm

Hee, the silly horse is ok! I love this story so very very much..... I hope the next update arrives Soon smiley face

Thu Jun 10, 2004 4:34 pm

Eeek, will everyone be ok?? I really hope so! I eagerly await your next update, may it be quick Very Happy smiley face

Sat Jun 19, 2004 11:23 am

Bah! Nonono! Too much bad news in one chapter Bawl smiley face

Oh, this story is WONDERFUL, I can't believe noone else is reviewing it Evil or Very Mad smiley face

Well, I impatiently await the next installment!

Sat Jun 19, 2004 2:16 pm

And I thank you sincerely for your dedication, AzureDragoness Very Happy smiley face

I'll post them as fast as I can write them!

Sun Jun 20, 2004 6:34 pm

Woohoo! Even more! *grins* Oh, but..... um.... oh dear. That's going to leave Faye between a rock and a hard place. *worships authoress* Thank you oh mighty goddess of angst! More soon, ne? Very Happy smiley face

Mon Jun 21, 2004 11:20 pm

*shakes head* NEVER think it can't get any worse, because then it will. Poor Arwen, are you SURE this isn't going to kill her?? Yeesh..... oh, but I lvoe this story, for all of my whining Very Happy smiley face

More soon, oh please mighty authoress!

Sat Jun 26, 2004 9:05 pm

First off--me likes!! Very Happy smiley face

I loved the idea of Celebrain being bitten by a vampire, it added a different twist to canon and you made it plausible too which is always good. And from a technical standpoint, I could find very little wrong with this story--I loved your descriptions and characterizations of everyone; the scene between Arwen and Galadriel is a favorite of mine.

Here comes the critique: I liked how you left so many question unanswered throughout the story to give it an air of mystery, but the even that transitional ending seemed a little too abrupt to me--I just sat there after I read it thinking "Is that it?!?! There's gotta be more!" I would love to see more scenes with Arwen and Faye in order to give us insight on them. For instance, how would Faye react when she found out that Arwen had rejected immortality in order to spend a lifetime with Aragorn? She did promise Celebrain that Arwen would come to the Undying Lands and we know Faye takes promises very seriously. And moreso, how would she react to Aragorn himself? Faye is exceptionally protective of Arwen, would she see him as a threat? You've got a great character in Faye and a great storyline for and you've already shown us alot, but I for one would love to see more stories about her after the trilogy is done. I do realize that this is the middle of a trilogy, so if these suggestions have no merit feel free to disregard them . .. they are just that; suggestions. Happy writing!

Sun Jun 27, 2004 2:23 am

TXFaramirFangirl, your questions will soon be answered. The third story in the trilogy is currently under construction, and the main point of the third tale is Faye's reaction to Aragorn. . .for the most part. We still don't know what happened to Faye to prevent her returning. . . . Twisted Evil smiley face

That will be in a short story titled "The Last One Standing", which I am currently writing. I should have it done very soon. Still. . .care to take a guess?

Sun Jun 27, 2004 5:13 pm

Seribaba~
Nah . . .I like surprises Smile smiley face

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