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HisieLome
Joined: 17 Jan 2004
Reviews: 133
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Fri Jun 04, 2004 11:56 pm
Awww, a tethen Estel tale

Well done. Glorfy is so big and brave....He really has such a sweet spot for the newest Elrondion. Evil, bad Erestror!

Minna Sedh,
Hisie Lome
 
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Rous

Joined: 20 Mar 2004
Reviews: 503
Location: Trying to stay below the radar
Mon Jun 07, 2004 5:50 am
Great premise. I really liked the story, but if your word processor has a grammar check, or a thesaurus, you may want to try that. There were a few mis-used words. They were spelled correctly, just not the right words. Ex: conscious instead of conscience. Also, commas used differently would help grasp the meaning quicker. Otherwise, a good job. Sorry, just an anal English major. I finished the story, so the grammar was not too bad. Hope to see more.
 
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PonytailGoddess
Joined: 08 Mar 2007
Reviews: 30
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Fri Jul 06, 2007 12:28 am
AWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
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