Reviews for "Strange Revels"

Fri Jun 04, 2004 1:21 pm

Oh, write their next meeting! Please! This story was scrumptious, and so believeable. I love how you write Merry. Only one thing bothered me throughout... did he ever get a chance to pee? If not, he's doubly impressive for completing an entire seduction whilst having a full bladder. Wink smiley face

Fri Jun 04, 2004 1:43 pm

Awww... that was so cute! Sweet story about what never happened, but could well have happened. Wink smiley face

Fri Jun 04, 2004 2:35 pm

Viv said
> Oh, write their next meeting! Please! This story was scrumptious, and so believeable. I love how you write Merry. Only one thing bothered me throughout... did he ever get a chance to pee? If not, he's doubly impressive for completing an entire seduction whilst having a full bladder. Wink smiley face

Teehee.... well yeah, he was on his way *back* from that actually Smile smiley face

Any suggestions on how I can, uhmmm, make that clear? *grin*

Fri Jun 04, 2004 3:06 pm

Oh my! This was...uuuhmm...inspiring. Yes, inspiring!

Never thought of hobbits in that fashion before. I will continue being a PEF, but maybe I can spice things up with a wee hobbit from time to time?! Laughing smiley face

And yes, I was impressed too by Merry being able to go through with it all with a full bladder! Very Happy smiley face

Anyway, very well done!

Fri Jun 04, 2004 3:19 pm

Yikes! I obviously need to fix this 'problem'! Surprised smiley face

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That's what happens when randy hobbits wander through your mind at 2 am Twisted Evil smiley face

Sat Jun 05, 2004 11:23 am

Hah, that was brilliant! About the only thing I expected to see and didn't, was a bit more reaction from Merry about the fact that she's a Big Person; his lack of surprise or even thinking about the different scale of things made me wonder if he's done this before! Maybe you're deliberately leaving it out to avoid hitting the hobbit/BP squick, but then if you're going to write Merry/Eowyn, there's probably no way of getting away from squicking somebody.

And I agree, I'd love to know what he thinks when they meet again. Or what she thinks, although she seems less likely to remember it very well.

--Rose

Sat Jun 05, 2004 12:51 pm

I am honored to say that this was the first piece of het Hobbit smut that I have read and I loved it. Sometimes the best things do come in small packages.

Sat Jun 05, 2004 12:56 pm

Well, it seems terribly odd to *me* anyway Smile smiley face

That's why this is so completely AU and outside my world Wink smiley face

I really only did this on a dare. But to answer the question of Merry noticing, well, he most certainly did notice! And that was... exciting and pretty darn neat! (just imagine what exists about 10 inches down from your mouth and you can see why he wouldn't terribly mind the view) Between being a bit sauced and a rather adventurous soul in the first place... Well, you get the idea Smile smiley face

Well, I'm going to go home and think about this 'morning after' idea... *grin* I was just going to leave it there, but... *hops off to find a good bottle of wine*
Let's see what the muse and a well turned glass can do! Very Happy smiley face

Mon Jun 07, 2004 10:04 pm

Teehee, tee hee... Oh, that Merry IS a wild one! Yes, I can definitely see him considering her a challenge, and being fairly happy with the position her size puts him in.... hehehehh... Ah, yes, we'll sway those PEF's yet, we will.

Ariel

Tue Jun 08, 2004 7:05 am

Oh my. That was one damn fine idea, dear.
*will never think of hobbits same way before again....*

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