Reviews for "Cats and Elves"

Fri Jun 04, 2004 1:31 pm

*grins* Werecats! Great, now you've got me hooked Razz smiley face

Err, one teensy tiny problem is that you seem to change tenses randomly. It IS only a minor problem, however, and I love this tale besides that. Please update soon!

Sat Jun 05, 2004 1:45 pm

*bounces wildly* Oh oh oh, it can't end there!! Now I reeeeeeeally really really need to find out what happens next. Hee, fixed up your tenses nicely in this chapter, I think-- go you Bounce smiley face

If I give you a bunny, will it bribe you into updating again even sooner? Wink smiley face

Sun Jun 06, 2004 1:07 pm

*blinks a bit then shakes her head* Hah, your puny mind-tricks will not work on me!! Err, now, where was I? Something about updating again soon? *wanders off looking very confused*

Thu Jun 10, 2004 3:00 pm

Yeee, cute little kitten! *admires from a safe distance* Ok, that cliffhanger wasn't QUITE as evil, so kudos on that. But no worries, I'll be whining about cliffies until the story is finished!! Twisted Evil smiley face

*skips off to wait impatiently for another chapter*

Sun Jun 13, 2004 2:00 pm

She's all better? Yay Very Happy smiley face

Nice chapter, I like the loving little kitten ^__^ Please continue? I shall have my whole plotbunny army here to keep you "motivated" Twisted Evil smiley face

Tue Jun 15, 2004 8:11 pm

Sheesh, that's a lot of bunnies! Anya would flip out and whack her computer screen with whatever weapon Xander had left lying handy, wouldn't she? *snicker*

Well I think this story is cute and I am looking forward to more. Very soon, I hope. What's the "kitty's" name gonna be? Um, hope the guys don't change clothes in front of her. Imagine how embarrassed they'll be later! LOL

Wed Jun 16, 2004 11:04 am

*giggle* Your little acts at the end of each chapter are very funny. *g*

I really liked this part. Now, what will Aragorn do? Will he pretend not to recognize her and talk to Elrond in private? I hope so because if he tells Van Helsing I will be sorely disappointed in him! *pout* Very cute of Elrond to be on the cat's side when it comes to getting her way. That's not a spell or anything, is it? *curious*

Wed Jun 16, 2004 11:31 am

KITTY!!!!!!!!!!! Awwww, I hope they find out about her soon, I wanna see their faces Very Happy smiley face

Oh, no worries, I could make a bigger army if I wanted.... Twisted Evil smiley face

I LOVE this story, more soon, please??

Fri Jun 18, 2004 5:18 am

Predictions? I didn't make any, just asked questions and made a statement is all. *g*

So, what will Elrond find out about the kitty? Will he realize what she is and confront her, but maybe keep her secret from everyone else for her own protection? Will he be fooled into thinking she's a regular cat if she's on her guard more? You did say she's very young, and youngsters make mistakes, so I'm thinking she might make one or two (more than she already has) and give herself away completely. (THAT was a prediction. LOL)

May I offer a little bit of advice? You really need a beta to catch mispellings and wrong words in places where you most likely make a change and then didn't delete everything that was no longer necessary. (I do that ALL the time, much to my annoyance.) If you go to the message boards and ask for one, I'm sure someone will volunteer. Smile smiley face

And once again your little bit at the end was cute and funny. Will we get to "see" the reactions of the clones when they find out they're to be "stored" away in the cellar while you're busy? *giggle* Better make sure you trick them into going down there or you'll have a mutiny on your hands. LOL

As for reading your other story, I'll see what I can do later, (ought to be going out the door this very second to get to work) but I can't promise anythng and today will be extremely busy. Okay? *g*

Fri Jun 18, 2004 11:10 am

*giggles* Gotta love da clones Very Happy smiley face

Ooooooh, I hope you get many many chances to update despite being busy-- I reeeeeeeeeally like this story and wanna read more! *mounces impatiently* Please? Pleasepleasepleasepleaseplease!

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