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Saralitazie
Joined: 17 Apr 2004 Posts: 297 Location: Stamping Property of Litzy the Lush all over Glorfindel.
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Posted: Mon Jun 28, 2004 11:40 am Post subject: |
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| BittenBuggy wrote: | | Isabeau wrote: | | But apparently in Midde-earth, lots of folks steer their horses by divine right..... |
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My thoughts exactly!  _________________ "Society does not want free men. They torment freedom, democracy, anything you want. But they do not want free men. Society wants conditioned men; men who march in step." - Henri Charriere
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Isabeau

Joined: 03 Sep 2003 Posts: 38
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Posted: Tue Jul 06, 2004 12:36 pm Post subject: |
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| daw wrote: | I have to say that I'm driven mad by the misuse of lie and lay. I just came from an aerobics class where I had to restrain myself from telling the teacher that we were going to lie - LIE - on the floor not lay on it.
Lie means to recline. It's intransitive. Lay, on the other hand, is a transitive verb. It means to put something down and it takes an object. I lay my book down but I, myself, lie down on the floor and weep. |
I think the problem is understandable. The error is taught a lot of us from an early age--"Now I lay me down to sleep....." |
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Ningloreth

Joined: 31 Dec 2003 Posts: 39 Location: Manchester, UK
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Posted: Thu Sep 30, 2004 6:53 pm Post subject: |
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For me the wonderful thing about fan fiction is that it gives anyone the chance to have a go at writing a story and then post it for other people to read.
And I'm often amazed by a story that has been written by someone who is obviously either very young or very inexperienced, and whose text is full of typos, but who has come up with a powerful, dramatic plotline or with an unexpected phrase that exactly nails what they are trying to say. Their stories sometimes have an energy that more polished work lacks...
I blame Word for many of the problems people have with grammar, spelling and punctuation. Having someone automatically correct your spelling mistakes (usually when you are looking the other way) does you no favours. And though some of its grammatical suggestions are sound, many are crass. For example, if you type 'their' it will underline it in green and suggest 'there' - not because 'there' is correct (it doesn't know because it doesn't understand the context) - but because the two words are commonly confused. You must all have seen what happens if you let it loose on text that mentions 'elves' and 'ents' and 'Valar' and uses unfamiliar names like 'Legolas' and 'Aragorn'...
And why it is so obssessed with eradicating passive constructions? If Legolas walks up to a door that is not transparent, not knowing who is on the other side, and knocks on it, then, from Legolas' POV, 'the door is opened (by person as yet unknown)'. (I use Legolas' rather than Legolas's because that is apparently the correct form for an ancient or mythical name ending in 's' ).
Many people I know blindly accept anything that Word suggests. I always turn Word's grammar checking off. At least then, as they say, any mistakes are my own. |
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Viv Challenge Admin

Joined: 24 Apr 2003 Posts: 71 Location: Texas
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Posted: Thu Sep 30, 2004 7:27 pm Post subject: |
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I wouldn't go so far as to blame Word (ultimate responsibility is the writer's, because we can all turn off the irritating auto-check feature), but I do think it makes a lot of people lazy.
And I'm all for lazy, crummy grammar. If everyone wrote English correctly and clearly, I would have no job.  |
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ellisk

Joined: 23 Jan 2004 Posts: 579 Location: Icon by Alassante! Wow!
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Posted: Thu Sep 30, 2004 8:04 pm Post subject: |
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I just happened across this reference on this subject today. It is a list of words like accept vs except, advise vs advice etc. Words we mess up in English all the time. Have a look at this:
http://www.helical-library.net/desk/spelling.asp
And the archive has some nice fiction too. |
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Rous

Joined: 20 Mar 2004 Posts: 358 Location: Trying to stay below the radar
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Posted: Thu Sep 30, 2004 8:46 pm Post subject: |
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| Isabeau wrote: | | I think the problem is understandable. The error is taught a lot of us from an early age--"Now I lay me down to sleep....." |
I actually think this may be correct. If you said "Now I lay down to sleep", that would be wrong. But the object you are laying down is yourself.
A pet peeve and problem I have is whose and who's. But, I was taught that the rule is, if it has an apostrophe before the s, it is usually a contraction. It's, there's, here's, etc. The major exception is for nouns. People's is possesive, peoples is plural. If I am wrong about this, I am sure someone will let me know. But considering my age, it is possible that the rules have changed.
I read everything aloud. Over and over. I will catch things the tenth time that I missed before. And, thanks to that habit, there have been few changes to my fics, now that I do have a beta. But I do agree with Works grammar check. I know that some of the things it is correcting are correct. _________________ The only opinions that count, are those of the ones in control.
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Thuriniel
Joined: 29 Jul 2003 Posts: 665 Location: Watching the purple sky fly over me ...
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Posted: Fri Oct 01, 2004 8:00 am Post subject: |
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| Rous wrote: | A pet peeve and problem I have is whose and who's. But, I was taught that the rule is, if it has an apostrophe before the s, it is usually a contraction. It's, there's, here's, etc. The major exception is for nouns. People's is possesive, peoples is plural. If I am wrong about this, I am sure someone will let me know. But considering my age, it is possible that the rules have changed.
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That is one pet peeve of mine as well ... I just cannot stand it. It does have its advantages having learned English from scratch ... I can tell you when you're using a possessive pronoun versus a contraction of subject and verb, or the saxon genitive -- aka possessive -- "Peggy's cat" = "The cat of Peggy."
I have noticed myself, however, incurring lately in the most annoying use of "your" instead of "you're" ... and I think it's because it simply is faster to write !!!! I'm very dissapointed on myself everytime I catch one of those on my writing ...
And I don't think the rules have changed ... it's just a matter of understanding basic grammar and knowing what it is that you're trying to convey. Are you expressing possession? Then you use "its, your, their" Are we talking about subject + verb contraction? Then you use "it's, you're, they're ...". Easy as pie, as you Americans say ... although I'm yet to find an easy pie recipe ! _________________ ~ boe an phân pedi ‘lam dadui ~
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Rous

Joined: 20 Mar 2004 Posts: 358 Location: Trying to stay below the radar
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Posted: Fri Oct 01, 2004 9:43 am Post subject: |
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| Thuriniel wrote: | | Rous wrote: | A pet peeve and problem I have is whose and who's. But, I was taught that the rule is, if it has an apostrophe before the s, it is usually a contraction. It's, there's, here's, etc. The major exception is for nouns. People's is possesive, peoples is plural. If I am wrong about this, I am sure someone will let me know. But considering my age, it is possible that the rules have changed.
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That is one pet peeve of mine as well ... I just cannot stand it. It does have its advantages having learned English from scratch ... I can tell you when you're using a possessive pronoun versus a contraction of subject and verb, or the saxon genitive -- aka possessive -- "Peggy's cat" = "The cat of Peggy."
I have noticed myself, however, incurring lately in the most annoying use of "your" instead of "you're" ... and I think it's because it simply is faster to write !!!! I'm very dissapointed on myself everytime I catch one of those on my writing ...
And I don't think the rules have changed ... it's just a matter of understanding basic grammar and knowing what it is that you're trying to convey. Are you expressing possession? Then you use "its, your, their" Are we talking about subject + verb contraction? Then you use "it's, you're, they're ...". Easy as pie, as you Americans say ... although I'm yet to find an easy pie recipe ! |
Even worse than all this, is the appalling lack of control in forum posts, IMs and reviews. I do not see it overly-much on this site, but, oh my, just check out the ones on ff.net and others of that ilk. Even if the poster has penned a fairly well-written piece, they seem to believe that it is all right to drop all semblance of good grammar, or maybe it is just a manners thing. I am sorry, if you are 'speaking' (in this case typing) in the public forum, then use common sense. Just because it is an IM or PM does not excuse bad writing. I think it is due to people thinking too casually. I know everyone speaks differently in school, at church or work, and then has a different speach pattern with their friends. But, people should realize that others are turned off by the seeming lack of education. And that is how I perceive it.
Sorry, everyone. Just having a bad week. I was accused of being stupid this week. And I do not mean casually. I mean 'lack of education'. And by an educated person, no less, who thought they were better. But, that is a whole other subject. My dander is so far up, I cannot see it.
*puts soapbox up where, hopefully, she cannot reach it for a while* _________________ The only opinions that count, are those of the ones in control.
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SilverMoonLady

Joined: 14 Jul 2003 Posts: 1201 Location: Breaking in a Brandybuck... *wicked grin*
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Posted: Fri Oct 01, 2004 10:49 am Post subject: |
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Sorry to hear that, Rous, some people are jerks! I have to admit that I cannot abide the laziness that poorly written messages indicate. I mean, no one requires you to speak like a textbook in such an informal situation, but at least punctuate properly... I'm beginning to fear for a society and educational system that turns out people who cannot be bothered to write in complete sentences; our non-english speaking friends are putting us to shame! Imagine not managing to say something as simple as "I think you're a pretty cool person" in the tongue you've spoken for 16 years....
Feh...  _________________ Suffering an again off again connection with life...
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SpaceWeavil

Joined: 27 May 2004 Posts: 23 Location: Looking at shiny things
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Posted: Fri Oct 01, 2004 10:50 am Post subject: |
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I've noticed that with the reviews on FF.Net. Some of them made me wonder if the author didn't speak English as a first language. (Some made me think the author didn't speak it as a second, third or fourth to be honest ) My favourite one there though was when some helpful person told me I had spelled 'armour' wrongly because I put a 'u' in it.
Sorry to hear you had a bad one, Rous. I do sympathise as I've had similar treatment, from people who were supposedly friends as well.  _________________ Pervy Nazgul Fancier and owner of Fluffy the Fell Beast |
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Rous

Joined: 20 Mar 2004 Posts: 358 Location: Trying to stay below the radar
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Posted: Fri Oct 01, 2004 3:07 pm Post subject: |
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I blame it all on the education system. Football and other sports are more important than an actual education. And parents that do not oversee their children's education. My mother read to me, and expected me to learn to speak. She never used baby talk or talked down to me. I grew up with people thinking I was several years older than was, just because I could conjugate a verb and structure a sentance. My SO cannot see the importance of good grammar. He claims to not even know the terms. Ask him what a verb is, and he will ask, why is it important to know it? He does not read, and the movies I watch are so far above him, I get tired of explaining them. And this is true for most of the people I interact with on a daily basis. It is maddening. Can we not just teach our children the basics? Leave football for the corner lot. Most of these kids will never see the inside of a stadium, short of the nosebleed section. Why the emphasis on something that will only make them think of 'what might have been', or spend their lives enduring surgeries to repair damaged body parts.
(Oh-oh. That soapbox slipped out again, did it not? My bad. I apologize.) Oh, and does the period go in the paranthesis, or out.
Rous _________________ The only opinions that count, are those of the ones in control.
You make hay while the sun shines; beans you can combine after dark.
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Viv Challenge Admin

Joined: 24 Apr 2003 Posts: 71 Location: Texas
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Posted: Fri Oct 01, 2004 3:44 pm Post subject: |
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| SpaceWeavil wrote: | My favourite one there though was when some helpful person told me I had spelled 'armour' wrongly because I put a 'u' in it.  |
Oh, no. I'd ask you to verify that it's a cruel joke, but I suspect that it isn't. Which is awfully sad. We all know here that various nationalities spell various words differently, right? And that each version is completely correct, right?
(And that "towards" with the "s" is the UK version, not the US version.. )
Rous, speaking of that soapbox, I bet we could figure out a place where that educated person could stick it, eh? |
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Ningloreth

Joined: 31 Dec 2003 Posts: 39 Location: Manchester, UK
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Posted: Fri Oct 01, 2004 4:57 pm Post subject: |
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| Viv wrote: | | I wouldn't go so far as to blame Word (ultimate responsibility is the writer's, because we can all turn off the irritating auto-check feature) |
It took me years to learn how to turn it off.  |
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Ningloreth

Joined: 31 Dec 2003 Posts: 39 Location: Manchester, UK
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Posted: Fri Oct 01, 2004 4:59 pm Post subject: |
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| And it will probably take me another year to learn how to post quotes... |
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Rous

Joined: 20 Mar 2004 Posts: 358 Location: Trying to stay below the radar
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Posted: Fri Oct 01, 2004 5:30 pm Post subject: |
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| Viv wrote: | | Rous, speaking of that soapbox, I bet we could figure out a place where that educated person could stick it, eh? |
Most emphatically. I seriously wanted to slap him. And yes, it was a male. I have noticed that among very well educated males. They are so much better than women. And if you do not agree with their assessment on anything, forget it. My college instructor expected all of his students to end up concert pianists. Since I knew that I wanted a family and was only going because my mom wanted it, I did not go down that road. We had quite a few go rounds. I am not sorry I choose the path I did. I am, for the most part, very happy with my life (except this week). I would not have traded it in for all the concert halls in the world, but in his eyes, that made me less. I am sorry for any guys out there that are different, but you just have to be in the minority. While I am intolerant of bad writing, I believe that I am at least tolerant of those who either did not have the same opportunities that I did, or did not have the ability. And there is a HUGE difference between lack of ability, and just plain laziness.
*managed to pull soapbox from dark nether regions for one more tirade. putting it back now* _________________ The only opinions that count, are those of the ones in control.
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