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PostPosted: Wed Aug 11, 2004 11:37 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Moralanqua wrote:
I know the Donna fic! LMAO!

That particular author has many fics out with the stupidest names! Very Happy Its all self insert/ wish fulfilment when it SHOULD be fanfiction. Its Tolkiens sandbox we're playing in so its his sand we should build our sandcastles with! Cool


I’ve never understood that in fan fiction, where a writer either completely changes or disregards canon and makes up their own little universe, usually, as you say, to play out their own fantasies. I write fan fiction because I like canon as established. It was the canon that made me get interested in this universe in the first place, and I like the characters the way they are. So why would I want to ignore all that and write my own? I can do that and call it original fic if I want, I suppose, but not fan fiction.

I had this argument long and hearty with another writer once who said that writing non-canon/OFCs was far more difficult and demanding than keeping to canon, because, according to her, in canon you had it all worked out for you. I tried to tell her that keeping to canon was equally, if not more difficult, as it required a little ol’ thing called research, but eventually gave up arguing with her. To me, if you invent your own characters that are totally removed from canon in name, powers, race etc., then it isn’t a Tolkien (or whatever other fandom) based story anymore. I would still say that to create a believable, rounded OFC that fits into the universe without jarring requires applause and is far more noteworthy.

Thus endeth my rant. It probably makes no sense, as I am trying to avoid words containing the letter ‘H’ until I get my keyboard fixed Very Happy

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PostPosted: Wed Aug 11, 2004 12:19 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

NancyBrooke wrote:
GypsieRose wrote:
We'd be interested to hear what anyone on this thread who has read our story "A Ranger's Temptation" thinks of the OFC, Meredith. Does she seem Sueish to you?

Meredith seemed not at all Sue-ish to me.

Just found this comment--thanks for responding, Nancy! Meredith was created for purposes of being the other half in an Aragorn sex story, so I wondered if that made her seem Sueish.

Ellbee wrote:
For one thing, I don't think that every person in all of Gondor is going to speak Elvish or use Elvish naming conventions.

If your character is a Gondorian of Numenorean descent, she should speak Sindarin. It's part of their basic education. Even if she isn't Numenorean, she'll still likely know a smattering of Sindarin. And the vast majority of Gondorian Dunedain characters have Sindarin names, with a few exceptions of Quenya or Adunaic.

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Lord knows there are plenty of things that make me stop reading a story. I don't much care for the Michelles and the SilverMoonBeams, or the teenager falls into M-E, or Faramir stories,

*blinks* Wow, that's a sweeping statement. Although I have my favorites like anyone, I can't think of any character that I refuse to read about simply because of who s/he is. What puts you off so much about Faramir??

Eyborg wrote:
I've actually started writing a story about an OFC who is actually called Isabella. But since she is a hobbit (Isabella Took to be exact), I thought it would work. Smile

Hmm, I'm not sure. Although Tolkien did use some "real" English/European names for hobbits and for men around Bree, I can't remember him ever using one derived from Hebrew. Am I forgetting anything? And IIRC, Isabella is a form of Elizabeth, which is Hebrew.

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PostPosted: Wed Aug 11, 2004 3:59 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

GypsieRose wrote:
Eyborg wrote:
I've actually started writing a story about an OFC who is actually called Isabella. But since she is a hobbit (Isabella Took to be exact), I thought it would work. Smile

Hmm, I'm not sure. Although Tolkien did use some "real" English/European names for hobbits and for men around Bree, I can't remember him ever using one derived from Hebrew. Am I forgetting anything? And IIRC, Isabella is a form of Elizabeth, which is Hebrew.

Oh dear, I had forgotten that... Doh! It's a shame really, because Isabella sounds so hobbitish (like Belladonna, Mirabella and Estella), and it also came to my mind when I was reading the Took family tree and found the name Ferdinand (which is a name of a Spanish regent just like Isabella). A bit far-fetched, but eh... Very Happy
Well, I'll think better of it, and see what I can do. - How about Isadora then?


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PostPosted: Wed Aug 11, 2004 5:28 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

If there's a Ferdinand Took, I really don't see why you can't have an Isabella.

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PostPosted: Wed Aug 11, 2004 6:20 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Isadora should work...but Isabella just sounds better (in my opinion anyway) and I think Roisin's right; if there's a Ferdinand, surely there could be an Isabella.
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PostPosted: Wed Aug 11, 2004 7:43 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

GypsieRose wrote:
Ellbee wrote:
]For one thing, I don't think that every person in all of Gondor is going to speak Elvish or use Elvish naming conventions.

If your character is a Gondorian of Numenorean descent, she should speak Sindarin. It's part of their basic education. Even if she isn't Numenorean, she'll still likely know a smattering of Sindarin. And the vast majority of Gondorian Dunedain characters have Sindarin names, with a few exceptions of Quenya or Adunaic.


--Rose


Eh, our character is a village/country girl who was married to a very minor landowner on the "outskirts of Gondor." (We were deliberately vague because it wasn't really relevant to the story. ) Not really, we thought, the sort of person who would have a very extensive education beyond learning to read, and keeping accounts necessary for running a farm household, and from an area that wouldn't be overly concerned with Elvish culture. But this conversation is making me wish we'd thought to use some bastardized, little-remembered Sindarin for rustic curse words.

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Lord knows there are plenty of things that make me stop reading a story. I don't much care for the Michelles and the SilverMoonBeams, or the teenager falls into M-E, or Faramir stories,

*blinks* Wow, that's a sweeping statement. Although I have my favorites like anyone, I can't think of any character that I refuse to read about simply because of who s/he is. What puts you off so much about Faramir??



Ah, yes. Faramir. Well, my own personal view of Book!Faramir is that he's a little too flawless and rather boring. The very loud, almost unanimous cries of "character rape!" about Movie!Faramir (who I much, MUCH preferred) shows that most Faramir fans prefer the perfect Faramir of the books, and write stories glorifying his perfection. They just aren't for me.

-Ell Cool

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PostPosted: Wed Aug 11, 2004 8:26 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I don't see a problem with Isabella, myself. The only rule I've come across about Hobbit names is in Letters where the professor says that Hobbits on the social level of Samwise and his father have very Saxon names as a rule. But then he says that he didn't obey that rule by making their last name Gamgee. Other than the use of flower names, I don't see a pattern to Hobbit names.

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But this conversation is making me wish we'd thought to use some bastardized, little-remembered Sindarin for rustic curse words.


ROFL Oh, that made me laugh.

A while back I was playing around with Mora on IM and making up nasty Sindarin phrases and curse words. Now I wish I'd saved some of them. I'll just have to start over again. Twisted Evil


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PostPosted: Wed Aug 11, 2004 8:44 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Eyborg,

I have to agree that "Isabella" has a fine Tookish ring to it. I was thinking...the Took family tree features names like "Isengrim" and "Isembard." Maybe you could spell the name "Isebella" and figure it's a feminine derivative of one of those?

Ellbee,

Far be it from me to go too deeply into the touchy subject of Faramir characterization; I was just curious what set you so strongly against him. However--and I promise this will be my last comment on the subject in this thread--I'm always puzzled what makes people single out the book version of the character as "too perfect," in a book where practically all the good guys are perfect. I'm not saying other readers don't have the right to feel that way, just that he seems "only" on a par with the rest of the good guys to me, not a standout goody-goody. Ah well. Obviously, mileage varies.

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PostPosted: Wed Aug 11, 2004 9:17 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

GypsieRose wrote:


Ellbee,

Far be it from me to go too deeply into the touchy subject of Faramir characterization; I was just curious what set you so strongly against him. However--and I promise this will be my last comment on the subject in this thread--I'm always puzzled what makes people single out the book version of the character as "too perfect," in a book where practically all the good guys are perfect. I'm not saying other readers don't have the right to feel that way, just that he seems "only" on a par with the rest of the good guys to me, not a standout goody-goody. Ah well. Obviously, mileage varies.

--Rose


Really, Aragorn is the only one who is close to a Faramir level of perfection, and frankly, I find Book!Aragorn kinda boring as well. Once again, I think PJ improved on the book by showing us the internal conflict and character growth that was only hinted at in the appendices. But that's the thing, it <i>was/i> hinted at, and even Book!Aragorn had his moments of doubt in himself. But look at the rest - the Hobbits screw things up now and then just by being themselves, Boromir falls for the Ring, Theoden falls for Grima, Eowyn abandons her duty, Gandalf is a grouchy old coot, Gimli and Legolas are snarky and bigoted. I'd hardly call all the good guys perfect. But as for Faramir, he's all Good and Noble. I think my irritation reached its height at the "not if I found it on the side of the road" thing. "Yeah, yeah," I said to myself, "mighty fine talk. Why don't you carry it then, Mr. Too-Pure-To-Be-Tempted?" I just prefer flawed characters; they are much more real and engaging to me.

-Ell

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PostPosted: Wed Aug 11, 2004 9:24 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I liked MovieFaramir's sadness.

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PostPosted: Wed Aug 11, 2004 9:26 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

*chuckle* I have a feeling if you tell a really devoted fan of Frodo or Sam that they're not shown to be as perfect as Aragorn and Faramir in the book, you'll get some argument. Also I do think book-Faramir has some moments which correspond to book-Aragorn's doubts. But oops, that's getting close to continuing to discuss. *slaps hand*

Um, so. OFC's?

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PostPosted: Wed Aug 11, 2004 10:00 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

GypsieRose wrote:
*chuckle* I have a feeling if you tell a really devoted fan of Frodo or Sam that they're not shown to be as perfect as Aragorn and Faramir in the book, you'll get some argument. Also I do think book-Faramir has some moments which correspond to book-Aragorn's doubts. But oops, that's getting close to continuing to discuss. *slaps hand*

Um, so. OFC's?

--Rose


Nothing wrong with discussion. I would never try to say that Faramir lovers are wrong, and FaramirFic sucks by definition and is destroying the entire fandom and Should Not Be Written. It's just not my thing. And I have to admit, just a couple of hours after I wrote that bit about not liking Faramir stories, I read one (Beyond All Measure, by Blue Iris) that made him come alive for me.

I don't know why Hobbit fans would want to see Frodo and Sam as perfect, that's just not a mindset I understand; Legolas has been my very favorite character since I first read the book forever ago, and I cheerfully admit that he is an asshole. I like him anyway.

As for OFCs, I have read many good ones. To tell the truth, I don't think an awkward name is going to make or break a fic. If the story is badly written, giving the OFC an authentic, certified Elvish name won't fix it. If the fic is well-written and captures my imagination, I don't really care if the OFC is called Edna Kneeknocker. As for my own, I'm not completely objective, of course, but I think they work, though I am always open to suggestions for improvement. Unfortunately, I haven't really gotten any (the "self-indulgent crap" feedback doesn't count, as there is nothing I can do, short of deleting the entire fic, to satisfy that particular reader.) I don't have any sort of formula - you know, Characteristic A + Flaw B = Good OC. They basically just exist as fully-formed individuals, and it's up to me to discover what makes them tick and how they behave.

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PostPosted: Thu Aug 12, 2004 1:10 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Moralanqua wrote:
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What about Yavanna? Or Nienna? Or Varda?


El - those are NOT the correct Elvish names. Varda is actually Elbereth etc

I cant remember off the top of my head, but I think those are meant to be the 'english' translations for the reader or maybe the Valerian versions.


IIRC there are different rules for the names of the Ainur (Valar/Maiar) than for ordinary folk. Like how in Valarin language only the Valar's name end in the letter 'z'. Though I don't remember what the rules for naming are in Elvish.

It does bother me as well when people are sloppy with research. While an ill-chosen name won't make me stop reading if the story itself is well written, it's unfortunately usually a sign that the writer has made a half assed attempt with research or discovering what's what in Middle-earth, and that doesn't bode well for the quality of the story. It's not a given that an ill-chosen name equals a sucky story and I have seen stories that were well written in spite of it, but it always raises a red flag for me as far as quality of the story.
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PostPosted: Thu Aug 12, 2004 11:19 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Andreth wrote:
Other than the use of flower names, I don't see a pattern to Hobbit names.


There's a mention on Ardalambion (in the section on Westron) that -a was supposed to be a name-ending pattern for masculine hobbit names, and that -o was intended to indicate feminine hobbit names. Well, then JRR went and broke that rule all over the place (Bilbo, Frodo), so it's understandably ignored.

My take on names: the author's gotta make me believe it. I recently named an elf Fifi. Now I get to explain, through the story, how that happened. If I fail, that's my failure as a writer, and it has nothing to do with the name itself. Giving characters bizarre names isn't a death knell for the story; it's just a really steep challenge for the writer.
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PostPosted: Thu Aug 12, 2004 12:47 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Yes, Miss Viv, you're right about the -a being masculine, but that was in the original Hobbit language and not the translations. He switched the endings around when he 'Englished' them. The Hobbit name of Bilba became Bilbo when translated. But your mentioning that reminded me of where that info came from and the section on Hobbit naming in Appendix F of RotK, and then my OC nature forced me to sit down and look it up to refresh my memory.

I won't quote all of it here, but basically it sounds like he took Hobbit names from all over the place. "To their maid-children Hobbits commonly gave the names of flowers and jewels."

Concerning the Tooks naming process it says, 'In some of the old families, especially those of Fallohide origin such as the Tooks and the Bolgers, it was, however, the custom to give high-sounding first-names."

Then a few paragraphs later we have "Names of classicial origin have rarely been used; for the nearest equivalents to Latin and Greek in the Shire-lore were the Elvish tongues, and these the Hobbits seldom used in nomenclature."

Then in Peoples of Middle-earth you have the behind-the-scenes look at the Appendices and here is where the question of using Hebraic names comes from - "It will be observed that I have not [>rarely] used Scriptural names or names of Hebraic origin to represent Hobbit-names. There is nothing in Hobbit lore or history that corresponds [added: closely] to this element in our names."

I've noticed this a lot in Tolkien's writings - he'll either originally have or go back and add words like seldom, rarely, often...or other vague terms. I figure this was to give himself some leeway with all these people who were writing in and correcting him or questioning him about his own work when he broke his own rules. Which was often. It also gives you leeway to use the name Isabella. Very Happy The 'devoted to God' meaning could be a cause for argument since Tolkien says that he didn't think the Hobbits practiced any form of worship or prayer and this is obviously the element that's missing in the Hobbit language. But he also says that they were aware of who Eru/God was, so it's not implausible.

I still think Isabella is a very high-sounding Tookish name and there's nothing wrong with leaving it as is.
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