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Forest



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PostPosted: Tue Sep 21, 2004 4:00 pm    Post subject: Writing smut Reply with quote

Just out of interest, how do you go about writing smut? Not too graphic, but smutty enough to enforce a high R rating. I've read some stuff, but never tried my hand at writing it.

Any advice/tips?

~Forest
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sindohte



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PostPosted: Tue Sep 21, 2004 4:14 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Well you can always take a look at the Writing About Sex thread which turned into a 19 page monster Rolling Eyes of everything you wanted to know about sex.

http://www.openscrolls.net/forum/viewtopic.php?t=614

But my main piece of advice is that unless you are writing a straight PWP, do not stick sex in your story simply to earn a R or NC17 rating. I can always tell when writers seem to plug in the obligatory sex scene because they want to gain some readers, rather than having sex occur as a natural consequence of an attraction between two characters.

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PostPosted: Tue Sep 21, 2004 6:16 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Sind's suggestion of reviewing the Writing About Sex is good. I have no idea what I said there and am far too lazy to go figure it out. But as a reader lately I've noticed a strong tendency for writers to do a standard "device-A-into-slot-B = everyone has happy orgasm" scene. The better smut is the stuff that works into the plot, that has a metaphorical tie to other themes in the story, or that provokes an unexpected romantic plot twist (for instance, what if Fantastic Hero Buff Boy turns out to be a lousy lover, but Doe-Eyed Heroine loves him anyway?). As a reader, those are the kinds of things I'd like to read.

As a writer, I'm still trying to master the ins and outs, figuratively speaking.
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PostPosted: Tue Sep 21, 2004 8:11 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Viv wrote:
The better smut is the stuff that works into the plot, that has a metaphorical tie to other themes in the story, or that provokes an unexpected romantic plot twist ...


Or, you know, is just good dirty imaginative fun. Cool

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