| View previous topic :: View next topic |
| Author |
Message |
MaidenGreenleaf
Joined: 29 Sep 2004
Posts: 2
Location: I'm with the Elves if ya need me.
|
 Posted: Fri Oct 15, 2004 7:53 pm Post subject: I need a beta, please. |
 |
|
This is my first story. It's called 'Far From Home'. I need some help with it!!! OSA says I need to change some of my use of words to more Tolkienized word usage. So PLEASE help me!!!!
It's about a girl from our time coming into Middle Earth. She meets the Fellowship of the Ring a little while after they've started their quest.
Characters: Fellowship; Roxanne(OC)
It has three chapters so far. It's not very long though. So it shouldn't be that hard of a task.
Thank you for your help!!! I really appreaciate it. PM me if you are willing to help. Thank you again.
-MaidenGreenleaf |
|
| Back to top |
|
 |
phoenixqueen
Joined: 15 Apr 2004
Posts: 61
Location: Florida
|
| Posted: Sat Oct 16, 2004 10:04 pm Post subject: |
|
|
I might be interested in helping you beta-read, but I'd need to know more about the story. Is it a Mary-Sue? That means, are you essentially putting yourself into the story, or is it a character that is only there to fall in love with Aragorn/Legolas/Gimli/Frodo/etc..?
Is there going to be romance? If it is, I may not be the best person to help you, cause I suck when it comes to helping in the romance department.
You can email me at phoenixqueen101@yahoo.com since I am not a frequent checker of this site this semester...I have too much to do!
phoenixqueen |
|
| Back to top |
|
|
Texasgirl
Joined: 18 Oct 2004
Posts: 895
Location: Texas (no shit, sherlock)
|
| Posted: Fri Oct 29, 2004 5:02 pm Post subject: |
|
|
heyy there girl -
if you need a beta, i'm game. drop me a PM and we can talk. you're story sounds interesting, and it will take me away from mucking stalls - YAY! no seriously though, i'd be happy to do it.
adios amiga,
texasgirl 
_________________
Damn, I love my home - except for the fact the nearest bit of civilization is forty miles away.
*Other co-founder of the "Howdy!" committee*
*Other co-founder of the official  foundation* |
|
| Back to top |
|
|
|
Live Journal Feed
