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Thuriniel
Joined: 29 Jul 2003 Posts: 665 Location: Watching the purple sky fly over me ...
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Posted: Sat Dec 18, 2004 6:53 pm Post subject: Drabble |
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I've been coming across this term lately in the world of Fanfic ... here's my question:
What's a drabble ? _________________ ~ boe an phân pedi ‘lam dadui ~
~ everyone should speak a second language ~ |
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VanatheEverYoung
Joined: 22 Aug 2004 Posts: 0 Location: USA
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Posted: Sat Dec 18, 2004 7:18 pm Post subject: |
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I think drabble refers to a story that is exactly 100 words. Someone who knows more will probably come along and correct me. _________________
Vána, the Ever-Young
"All flowers spring as she passes and open if she glances upon them; and all birds sing at her coming." |
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Thuriniel
Joined: 29 Jul 2003 Posts: 665 Location: Watching the purple sky fly over me ...
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Posted: Sat Dec 18, 2004 7:23 pm Post subject: |
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Exactly 100 words ... talk about compression ! _________________ ~ boe an phân pedi ‘lam dadui ~
~ everyone should speak a second language ~ |
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VanatheEverYoung
Joined: 22 Aug 2004 Posts: 0 Location: USA
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Posted: Sat Dec 18, 2004 7:26 pm Post subject: |
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Tell me about it. It takes longer to review than read. The first time I read one, it wasn't labelled as a drabble. Imagine my confusion with a one-paragraph story. _________________
Vána, the Ever-Young
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DarkElfChilde

Joined: 23 Aug 2004 Posts: 1013 Location: I'm located somewhere
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Posted: Sun Dec 19, 2004 1:05 am Post subject: |
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I think I have a drabble somewhere on my computer...er wait..it's a page long...I think...I have to go look. I should post it here too. -ponders- I have to edit some things though...
- goes to find the story-
- DEC _________________ [ ] |
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SilverMoonLady

Joined: 14 Jul 2003 Posts: 1201 Location: Breaking in a Brandybuck... *wicked grin*
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Posted: Sun Dec 19, 2004 10:49 am Post subject: |
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to be exact, a drabble is a complete piece which stands alone, comprising exactly 100 words, with an additional 10 or 15 (depending who you ask) for a title, if so desired.
It's an excellent exercise if you find yourself writing very verbose stuff that just feels heavy and drawn out. That's the point where I start drabbling, just to remind myself that more isn't always better:)) _________________ Suffering an again off again connection with life...
The joy of motherhood: what a woman experiences when all the kids are in bed.
*local PHF union rep* *tart of the week*
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Thuriniel
Joined: 29 Jul 2003 Posts: 665 Location: Watching the purple sky fly over me ...
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Posted: Sun Dec 19, 2004 1:00 pm Post subject: |
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I was thinking just that ... it sounds like a good exercise to practice on using strong verbs and impacting words in order to get the desired effect without going on and on (something that I tend to do ).
I think I might try writing one! _________________ ~ boe an phân pedi ‘lam dadui ~
~ everyone should speak a second language ~ |
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DarkElfChilde

Joined: 23 Aug 2004 Posts: 1013 Location: I'm located somewhere
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Posted: Sun Dec 19, 2004 1:09 pm Post subject: |
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I can never get exactly 100 words if I wrote one of these...as I tend to write more than that.  _________________ [ ] |
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SilverMoonLady

Joined: 14 Jul 2003 Posts: 1201 Location: Breaking in a Brandybuck... *wicked grin*
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Posted: Sun Dec 19, 2004 4:25 pm Post subject: |
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that's why its a good exercise! It really does make you find other ways of expressing yourself rather than the standard words one would use. You certainly can't fit a novel into the format, and you do have to work hard at it. I often go ahead and write the scene or feeling that I need and then pare down and down and down...
*feels a mini bunny bite*
Sil _________________ Suffering an again off again connection with life...
The joy of motherhood: what a woman experiences when all the kids are in bed.
*local PHF union rep* *tart of the week*
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NancyBrooke Challenge Admin
Joined: 11 May 2003 Posts: 160 Location: In a motel 6 by the airport
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Posted: Sun Dec 19, 2004 4:32 pm Post subject: |
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I thought it was 100 words or less.
If it's 100 exactly I'm going to have to reclassify some of my fics. _________________ NB Duchess of WHY TF Cant'chu Punctuate, First Duchess of F*&(ing &*ll yur comma placement sux!
Nazgul #3 in charge of ducking & sniggering
Garo golf a conu ned i eneth aran an ir ho delitha ad |
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SilverMoonLady

Joined: 14 Jul 2003 Posts: 1201 Location: Breaking in a Brandybuck... *wicked grin*
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Posted: Sun Dec 19, 2004 5:21 pm Post subject: |
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eek... uhmm.. well, let me consult another soul or two before you do that and make sure that it isn't just my mistaken interpretation... _________________ Suffering an again off again connection with life...
The joy of motherhood: what a woman experiences when all the kids are in bed.
*local PHF union rep* *tart of the week*
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SilverMoonLady

Joined: 14 Jul 2003 Posts: 1201 Location: Breaking in a Brandybuck... *wicked grin*
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Posted: Sun Dec 19, 2004 6:20 pm Post subject: |
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Ok, asked around, and the consensus is "exactly 100"...
But you know, your drabbles, "wordcount perfect" or not, are quite lovely and expressive in a precise style.  _________________ Suffering an again off again connection with life...
The joy of motherhood: what a woman experiences when all the kids are in bed.
*local PHF union rep* *tart of the week*
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dolarabee Site Admin

Joined: 21 Apr 2003 Posts: 175 Location: Sydney, Australia
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Posted: Sun Dec 19, 2004 9:29 pm Post subject: |
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I think I put 'drabble' on one of mine too... and I must admit I never checked the wordcount. I thought it was for short fics, not necessarily of a hundred words... oops.
do. _________________ Je sais de la vie qu'elle se termine souvent au lit,
Et que d'autres ont bien plus de chance trépassent de rire ou de jouissance,
Mais pire que la mort qui vient c'est l'amour qui ne vient jamais.
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Anna

Joined: 29 Jan 2004 Posts: 548 Location: Sweden
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Posted: Tue Dec 21, 2004 3:33 am Post subject: |
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Go read Nancy´s drabbles, everyone! They are absolutely exquisite! I can´t recommend them enough!  |
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NancyBrooke Challenge Admin
Joined: 11 May 2003 Posts: 160 Location: In a motel 6 by the airport
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Posted: Tue Dec 21, 2004 11:21 am Post subject: |
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| Anna wrote: | Go read Nancy´s drabbles, everyone! They are absolutely exquisite! I can´t recommend them enough!  |
 _________________ NB Duchess of WHY TF Cant'chu Punctuate, First Duchess of F*&(ing &*ll yur comma placement sux!
Nazgul #3 in charge of ducking & sniggering
Garo golf a conu ned i eneth aran an ir ho delitha ad |
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