Stupidest Line/Lines YOU Wrote in a FanFiction
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Viv Challenge Admin

Joined: 24 Apr 2003 Posts: 71 Location: Texas
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Posted: Tue Feb 01, 2005 10:26 am Post subject: |
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| Aha! I knew there was something hellish that actually made it to public viewing. When I first posted "Inspired" there was a very unfortunate line, something about the Iron Rod of Gondor. Oh yes. Happily, a reviewer pointed it out, I edited immediately, and now I can sleep at night. |
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ghettoelleth

Joined: 06 Nov 2004 Posts: 1804
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Posted: Wed Feb 02, 2005 12:21 am Post subject: |
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Okay, I'm putting this up because I want the little thingy on the left to have my name in every box, but I refuse to divulge which characters this line refers to:
Oh no, we wouldn’t want to detract from your radiant magnificence by bringing up your tendency to vomit on my shirt when you’ve had too much to drink _________________ "The trouble with quotes on the internet is that you can not confirm their validity." Abraham Lincoln |
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Alassante Virtual Village Mod

Joined: 10 Dec 2004 Posts: 20 Location: Hitchhiking to Rivendell
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Posted: Mon Feb 14, 2005 6:29 pm Post subject: |
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Okay - I was looking back at my reviews from previous stories (And NO do not go up and look at my stories list just to find this review - just trust me - it happened. Although if you really want to read one of my stories feel free, the first three are embarassingly not beta'd or perhaps this line might not have slid by.)
My character a female elf who shall remain nameless is having a discussion to Lord Elrond and she says.....
Drum roll......
"Life is too short."
As soon as I saw the review, I fixed it but still it is forever in my review that I made that little four word mistake. That's okay because now that I know about the miracles of betas - I plan to fix the whole story as well as the other first two I have posted here. In fact it was one of my betas that caught it! _________________ Nagzul #2 - The Nazgul of Shmoove
Crucio! Because stupidity should be painful!
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