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PostPosted: Mon Feb 14, 2005 5:22 pm    Post subject: the only explanation of the marysue Reply with quote

found this on google while searching for the perfect avvie picture...take a look

http://www.answers.com/mary+sue&r=67

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PostPosted: Mon Feb 14, 2005 6:16 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

So if we write a character that is totally opposite of everything Mary Sue, wouldn't she still be Mary Sue because she would be written as being better than everyone else? Hmmm
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PostPosted: Mon Feb 14, 2005 6:25 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Alassante wrote:
So if we write a character that is totally opposite of everything Mary Sue, wouldn't she still be Mary Sue because she would be written as being better than everyone else? Hmmm


Wouldn't the opposite of a MarySue be someone really boring and plain looking with no special abilities whatsoever?

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PostPosted: Mon Feb 14, 2005 6:34 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

If you think about it, Mary Sues SHOULD be in Tolkien fanfiction. Look at the man himself - all of his females in the LOTR are Mary Sues! Eowyn - super warrior kills Witch King, Arwen - super pretty (movie version washed the Nazgul down the river) considered the most beautiful in all of the land, and Galadriel - all powerful elvish ruler.

So in all fairness - fanfiction by Tolkien should require a Mary Sue, right??

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PostPosted: Tue Feb 15, 2005 12:17 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

You know, I'm feeling MIGHT prickly these days. And this topic is the prickliest of them all.

There are SO many definitions of "Mary Sue" and I find people who just get up in arms and bash just to be the penultimate of moronic.

Is she self - insert? Sometimes

Is she all - powerful? Sometimes

Is she drop - dead gorgeous? Usually

Is she different? Almost always

Is she believable? Depends on the skill of the writer

Does the canon character fall in love with her? If he knows what's good for him he will!

Is she deserving of all the scorn and abuse heaped upon her head? no and Hell no!

That she is normally the first character a writer experiments with - Almost always. So I hate reviews that have - this is really good, but your character is such a Sue. Smash And I see them with younger writers.

So she has odd eyes, interesting (weird) hair color, strange names, massive major super special powers? Who doesn't want their character to be striking? Different? My God people! You gotta make the poor girl stand out SOME way! How ever will Legolas see her in the sea of feminity if she doesn't? Angst? God forbid! That she should have PROBLEMS in her life. Or none at all.

And the sad thing is even plain, frumpy, not perfectly built OFC's with bad attitudes will be pointed at and mocked and labeled Mary Sue. I know. I wrote one. Damn PROUD of her I am too! And part of me doesn't get it! I was told - don't write her young or beautiful. Don't write her ALL powerful, not a perfect body. Give her weaknesses, give her problems. I did. She STILL got labeled. She doesn't belong in ME. Crazy

It's a no - win. No No

Well folks, I have really BAD news for you... Tolkien PURPOSELY left holes! The only canon females are far and few between and they are TAKEN! And as previously mentioned - they are mega-Sues too!

You know, if we are going to look at Sues, let's look at the PROFESSIONAL Sues in Tolkien. Faramir is admittedly JRRT's self-insert. So therefore, we SHOULD bash Faramir.

But I personally LIKE Faramir. He has his moments, you know?

And Aragorn - let's take a GOOD look at Aragorn: He was born poor, raised by Elves, everyone loved him... well those that hated him like... DIED... he becomes King of the most important country in Middle Earth and he marries the most beautiful female in the land - who gives up her IMMORTALITY to be with him , no less, and lives and dies happily ever after.

I'm screaming Marty Stu here! But I don't care, because he fits.

I don't really care if a story has a Mary Sue or not. Call me easy to please. That's not true. As long as it's well written, believeable (to me) and everything is put in it's proper place, I'm a happy camper.

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PostPosted: Tue Feb 15, 2005 6:03 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

SpaceWeavil wrote:
Alassante wrote:
So if we write a character that is totally opposite of everything Mary Sue, wouldn't she still be Mary Sue because she would be written as being better than everyone else? Hmmm


Wouldn't the opposite of a MarySue be someone really boring and plain looking with no special abilities whatsoever?


No Space, that's called a ghettoelleth.

Here here peepuhl! I love that ole bitch Mary. She has the coolest sex life, she adjusts well to really bizarre occurences, she paid attention in weapons classes and she's surprisingly not too put out that her spiritual beliefs have probably just been shot all to hell. No one ever mentions this in fandom, so I'm gonna have one of my OCs have a theological discussion with Glorfindel comparing the Valar to the saints of catholocism. Now THAT is erotica boys and girls. All said and done, read what you like, write what you like, leave what you don't like the hell alone. Variety is the spice of life, without it, we'd all be english. *soooo running away from Space* TG, I have a lovely Haldir avi you can have. Its a black and white pencil sketch but it is beautifully done. Gimme a shout if ya wanna see.

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PostPosted: Tue Feb 15, 2005 9:02 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Speaking of self-insertions... I think Tolkien himself admitted that both Aragorn and Beren were self-insertions. See:

Aragorn + Arwen
Beren + Luthien
John Ronald + Edith

Go figure. Wink

And Aragorn is definitely a Sue. Very Happy

As for "normal" females in LOTR... how about Rosie Cotton? She isn't a Sue, isn't she? And neither is Lobelia... Rolling Eyes
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PostPosted: Tue Feb 15, 2005 9:46 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

ghettoelleth wrote:

Variety is the spice of life, without it, we'd all be english. *soooo running away from Space*


'Sokay. I'm not English. Cool

Thing about bashing Mary Sues - what always gets me is the fact that no two people tend to agree on what actually is a Mary Sue. Personally I don't know for certain what makes one or if there are any set parameters, since I've seen characters that, following some definitions, would be out and out Sues written really well, and OFCs that, technically, should be un-Sueish OFCs written in a way that makes me think of 'Sues', if that makes sense.

I mean when I started on Bodysnatcher, I was expecting a load of 'Sue' cries to be launched at me, and fully expected to see the story on 'certain sites', shall we say, but for some reason it hasn't (yet). But every so often when I'm writing that story, or going over bits of it, I cringe and think 'this is such a Sue'. But then I was worried about that with 'Alliance' and Celebrian as well (since some of that was blatant self-insert).

There was a whole long (and interesting) discussion on this somewhere else in the forum a little while ago, where we all tried to figure out what the difference between a Mary Sue and an OFC was, and as far as I remember, it all came down to a matter of perception and taste on the part of the reader - some of the stories I think are Mary Sues might not be the ones you think are.

Personally I don't really have a problem with Sue-ish charcters - I don't really read OFC-related stories in general unless they're pimped *coughcircleofhandscough* and I find out I like them, or they're by an author I know, like Viv or Al, or I stumble on them by accident. But in general I prefer straightforward canon stories, gap-fillers and such.

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PostPosted: Tue Feb 15, 2005 10:34 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I honestly don't know why people make such a fuss about eye color. ANY eye color can be described as absolutely amazing and out of this world.

You can say "she had hazel eyes" or you could say "she had eyes the color of gold mixed with the green of new leaves." Am I describing the same eye color? Yes! Do "normal" people have this eye color? You bet! So do we all have a bit of Mary Sue in us? ... now ... that's a thought ...

I haven't found yet a satisfactory explanation of Sue ... so if the fic is good, I read, Sue or not. If the fic doesn't call me ... I drop it.

I stopped looking very long ago for Sue warnings.

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PostPosted: Tue Feb 15, 2005 10:56 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Sues are just like slash: some of 'em are really good, and some of 'em are really bad. It all depends on the strength of the writer and the realization of the character. One of my top-five favorite published writers, Orson Scott Card, consistently writes Sues/Stus. He has millions of copies in print and is frolicking in his vast success. So very obviously there's a market for that sort of thing.

I think the crusade should cease being anti-Sue and become instead anti-cliche. The quality of fic would go up considerably, I think.
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PostPosted: Tue Feb 15, 2005 10:57 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

To me it has to be an obvious "person dropped into ME" for the specific purpose to shag a canon character/join the Fellowship for said shagging to be a Suefic. I usually avoid those but there are the good ones like ZDV's. However, Suefics like Panic that try to say what would really happen are wonderful.

I was looking at some of my writing and I see a great deal of myself or my actions in them (no, for those of you who have read my stuff, I have never messed around with anybody's wife...that I know of ), so I guess all my stuff is a little Marty Stu-ish

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PostPosted: Tue Feb 15, 2005 11:26 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Eyborg wrote:
And Aragorn is definitely a Sue. Very Happy

I respectfully disagree: a cornerstone archetype (sorry) of folk tales in most cultures is the foundling/orphan/adopted/kid-who-feels-out-of-place who, after a host of adventures, discovers there really is somethings special about him and has to assume a remarkable destiny. I don't think these are Sues.

e.g.
    Harry Potter
    Frodo Baggins
    Aragorn
    Taran the Pig-Keeper (one of my very favorites)
    Morgan of Hed (another favorite)
    King/Prince Arthur
    etc.
    etc.

(OK - so they're all male Evil or Very Mad )

It's their struggles, their reluctance, their only gradual undertanding that makes them avoid the dull and cliche realm of Sue-dom.

They don't necessarily have remarkable powers, so much as inner strength (and the occasional enchanted sword/wand/empowering phallic symbol i.e. magical thing they cannot entirely control) and the remarkable destiny is usually no picnic.

This, IMHO, is what keeps these archetypes inherently resonant, and not sues.

To take this a step farther, part of what makes Boromir's story so sad is that he is the opposite - a priveleged, empowered, guy who always known his place and his destiny but at the last finds out it isn't at all what he was always told or believed but is, in fact, weakness and tragedy.

Alassante wrote:
If you think about it, Mary Sues SHOULD be in Tolkien fanfiction. Look at the man himself - all of his females in the LOTR are Mary Sues! Eowyn - super warrior kills Witch King, Arwen - super pretty (movie version washed the Nazgul down the river) considered the most beautiful in all of the land, and Galadriel - all powerful elvish ruler.

Yes, but none of them dominates the action, was invented solely for the purpose of sex-fantasy-fulfillment and/or has attributes beyond the established limits of their races (of course, Elves seem to have very few limits ...) therefore (IMO) not sue-y.

And, most importantly - Thank you, Texasgirl!! Excellent article - can't wait to read the "150 years of Mary Sue" one.

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PostPosted: Tue Feb 15, 2005 11:46 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Is wish-fulfillment necessarily a bad thing in fic?

If you match Aragorn or Luthien or Eowyn up against a Mary Sue litmus test, they score pretty high. So does Ender from Card's Ender's Game. So does Luke Skywalker (off the charts, in fact).

My point is, we need to stop saying "Mary Sue" like it's a bad word. It's not. It's a subgenre, a nuance, an element in the telling of a larger story.

This is why I say often that I like Mary Sues. Sue isn't inherently vile. She's just drawn that way. A lot.
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PostPosted: Tue Feb 15, 2005 11:47 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Okay, I see your point Nancy (hey, you forgot Luke Skywalker!), but like you said, those you mentioned are all male. Why can male characters always be "Sues" and nobody says anything (I think the "Sue" thing can be interpreted any way you want, and you do have a point in what you said) Smile but if somebody writes a female version of this type, she is always labelled as a Sue (and that as a bad thing)? Right now I can only remember one female "Sue" in literature who gets away with being a "Sue", and that's Astrid Lindgren's Pippi Longstocking. In many ways she's a Sue, but at the same time she is like an "anti-Sue". I think Mrs. Lindgren even said that Pippi was a self-insertion of sorts.

By the way, my favourite "Gary Stu" is probably Hergé's Tin-Tin. Very Happy
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PostPosted: Tue Feb 15, 2005 12:26 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Eyborg wrote:
Okay, I see your point Nancy (hey, you forgot Luke Skywalker!), but like you said, those you mentioned are all male. Why can male characters always be "Sues" and nobody says anything (I think the "Sue" thing can be interpreted any way you want, and you do have a point in what you said) Smile but if somebody writes a female version of this type, she is always labelled as a Sue (and that as a bad thing)? Right now I can only remember one female "Sue" in literature who gets away with being a "Sue", and that's Astrid Lindgren's Pippi Longstocking. In many ways she's a Sue, but at the same time she is like an "anti-Sue". I think Mrs. Lindgren even said that Pippi was a self-insertion of sorts.

By the way, my favourite "Gary Stu" is probably Hergé's Tin-Tin. Very Happy


Tin Tin? I have not heard of him for a LONG time. Darling little comic book character--goes everywhere and does everything! I love his tuft of hair! Very Happy

I agree with Inglor, I tend to see Mary Sues as "girl from Illinois wakes up in Middle-earth one morning" stories. Too transparent.

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