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HamsterofDOOM
Joined: 12 May 2005
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 Posted: Fri Jun 03, 2005 4:20 pm Post subject: Need beta and opinion please! |
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Hello everyone,
I would really like a beta more for their opinion on my story than for grammar and such. Because I have had my story read by a teacher, and pretty much got all the bumps smoothed out, but I'm sure there are a few mistakes we've missed. There could also be typos and such. Anyway, my story is mostly about characters I've made up because I'm always terrified that I'll screw up Tolkien's characters personalities!
It's about Legolas' older brother whom I've named Mertose and how he is always being pressured to marry. In this story he meets a beautiful Rivendell maiden, and also a mysterious girl who is less beautiful. So it's a romance but rated G. If anyone has any questions, or would like to read my story please post! Your opinion is much appreciated!
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NobleBone
Joined: 17 May 2005
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Location: Like you care
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I'll beta you if you'd like. I'm a big-time bookworm so I have a good feel for plot and grammar. I'm kind of loose on canon, I'm not that big on rules, so if you need help on that I'm not the one for you. I'll only disclose email through PM sorry  |
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