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inglor

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Posted: Mon Oct 24, 2005 10:43 am Post subject: Something we've lost |
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I watched a biography of Samuel Clemens (Mark Twain) yesterday . They were narrating some of his journals and what struck me was the writing. Everything the man wrote, even his journals, brought such concise and specific visuals. Every emotion and description was crystal clear. Now I know he was one of the greatest of American writers but if you have read or heard letters from that time period, it seems that we no longer have the ability to say so much with so little. Even listening to letters from privates in armies seem like master works compared to what we read today.
Is writing a lost art? Or have we moved on to other mediums in its place?
Or do I just need to read more?
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Yavanie

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Posted: Mon Oct 24, 2005 10:57 am Post subject: |
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OH definitely the writing is lost.
My great grandfather was a presbyterian minister and before that he taught at a sort of finishing school (where he met his wife, one of his students). His handwritten sermons are a joy to read, the descriptions and word choices, of course the immaculate and intricate handwriting can be difficult to decipher though.
We also have a small collection of the letters between them as they corresponded for SIX years before getting married. He came to Texas to establish a church and she remained with her family in North Carolina until he sent for her. Only a few remain but even simply talking about everyday things they paid attention to word choice (I think they just had more diverse vocabularies).
Some argument can be made that some of that the art of writing has been translated into other mediums, music and movies and the like, but those works had to get a great deal of their inspiration from somewhere, generally written works.
No not everyone is Mark Twain, but much of the delight of his stories rests in his attention of creating a scene and capturing a personality - in simple terms even.
I can tell you that the art of writing (handwriting and descriptive) is not given a lot of attention in public schools here in America. I mean, after all, it is much more important to make sure the kids can pass standardized tests and tolerate a wide range of politically correct stances so we can demonstrate and quantify the superiority of our educational system. Forget encouraging creativity or - gasp - personal expression. (okay off my soapbox now). _________________ Yavanie
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NancyBrooke Challenge Admin
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Posted: Mon Oct 24, 2005 3:16 pm Post subject: |
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I agree, that the art of writing letters is lost; as a culture we no longer rely on the writen word as a primary form of communication. As art, yes; as communication - no. Have you heard of "the Legacy Project?" (http://www.warletters.com/mission/index.html) It is an effort to collect as many letters written during war time (any war, any side) as possible. I've heard some of them read. Once upon a time even Joe Schmoe serving in France in 1914 was capable of some extraordinarily moving writing.
So many things have come along to erode that - phones, computers, office memos, advertising - all those things that stress immediacy and brevity before precision and language.
But, where reading is concerned I wonder if some of it isn't fashion, also. I mean, we, as the reading public, embrace a great many more styles and nationalities than we used to, and books have become a commodity rather than an 'art form'. But there are still some amazing writers out there, folks who seem to sweat every word; I'm thinking of Margaret Atwood specifically. It's out there, just not always easy to find. _________________ NB Duchess of WHY TF Cant'chu Punctuate, First Duchess of F*&(ing &*ll yur comma placement sux!
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Neniel

Joined: 29 Dec 2004 Posts: 147 Location: Hiding from the men in white. Contrary to common belief, psychiatrists are *very* sneaky people
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Posted: Mon Oct 24, 2005 3:59 pm Post subject: |
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Things have definitely changed in our days. The vast development of other media has placed writing far behind in an average person's priorities. Children are raised primarily with optical stimuli; why bother read a book when watching the TV can be so much easier? During those few precious years when a person's orientation is determined through their education and childhood experiences in general, actual writing is reserved merely for school assignments and that alone is enough to turn it into a chore rather than a creative way of expression. How many teenagers you know would give up their favorite TV show to sit down and read a good book? And how many more do you think would bother take the time and track down the exactly right words whenever they do bother to write about something?
I say this because I have noticed it first and foremost in my own self. Despite having devoured tons and tons of books since my early childhood, a fact that most of my friends considered an interesting 'quirk' at the best of times, I think mostly with images. Finding the exact words to describe what I'm thinking of is more of a hindrance than an enjoyable pastime.
But then again, we should not underestimate the faxt that more and more people today have access to the sort of education that would allow them to appreciate such things. People may have been more elegant writers in the past, but not all had the necessary schooling to explore this trait. Part of the fact that every day and age has it strengths and weaknesses I suppose... _________________ Dubbed Neni by the sweet OSA raving lunatics
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Rhapsody

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Posted: Mon Oct 24, 2005 4:13 pm Post subject: |
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Just a curious question then.... Am I the only one who most of the times write a story on paper before I type it in word? I have so many notebooks with idea's, chapters written and so on... _________________ I have not lost my mind - it's backed up on disk somewhere...
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SpaceWeavil

Joined: 27 May 2004 Posts: 23 Location: Looking at shiny things
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Posted: Mon Oct 24, 2005 4:37 pm Post subject: |
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| Rhapsody wrote: | | Just a curious question then.... Am I the only one who most of the times write a story on paper before I type it in word? I have so many notebooks with idea's, chapters written and so on... |
No, Rhaps, you're not alone. For years I wrote only on paper. Now I write mostly on computer but I do still do some work in notebooks. All my notes are in notebooks (there was a pic on my LJ I think, with the shelf-load of pink books...they are all my notes for UFO and LotR fan fic alone). I also take a notebook to work, where I have been writing little bits of a story whenever I have to hang about waiting. That's kind of been sacrificed for uni work lately, but it is still there, waiting for the next scene.
I do agree that modern writing has, in some cases, lost a little magic. I'm slightly biased though as I'm an ardent Victorian / Edwardian writing fanatic, and most of my favourite writers died decades ago. I have to say I've never cared much for Mark Twain, not to say that I don't think he's a good writer, only I never really got into any of his works. But someone like G.K.Chesterton or M.R.James just makes my day. With Chesterton, I love the vivid metaphors and descriptions, as well as the very understated nature of the text. Seems far more subtle to me than modern writing and I appreciate subtle far more than I appreciate having things fed to me on a platter.
I really can't get into writers like Clancy and such, as I adore the clever use of language in older books as well as the plot. Too many modern books to me are like film scripts, skipping from scene to scene and not using the written medium to its fullest effect.
That is just my opinion though. I have been told on numerous occasions that my writing is far to wordy and old fashioned, to the point of being boring, and that I should write more like Clancy and Dan Brown and so on. But sorry folks, I like prose and I like playing with it, even if that means I am too dated and boring to be published, that is what I intend to write.
Funny you should bring this topic up, Inglor, as I was actually thinking about Victorian literature compared to modern books today at work. _________________ Pervy Nazgul Fancier and owner of Fluffy the Fell Beast |
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ellisk

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Posted: Mon Oct 24, 2005 5:32 pm Post subject: |
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| Rhapsody wrote: | | Just a curious question then.... Am I the only one who most of the times write a story on paper before I type it in word? I have so many notebooks with idea's, chapters written and so on... |
I outline and write notes only on paper--something about it makes me more able to think. I too have tons of notebooks and loose papers that people would think were crazy scribblings if they found them.  _________________ It is only with the heart that one can see rightly; what is essential is invisible to the eye.
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ellisk

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Posted: Mon Oct 24, 2005 5:34 pm Post subject: |
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| SpaceWeavil wrote: | | That is just my opinion though. I have been told on numerous occasions that my writing is far to wordy and old fashioned, to the point of being boring, and that I should write more like Clancy and Dan Brown and so on. But sorry folks, I like prose and I like playing with it, even if that means I am too dated and boring to be published, that is what I intend to write. |
You keep doing it, Space--I am with you on that topic and you do write lovely prose. _________________ It is only with the heart that one can see rightly; what is essential is invisible to the eye.
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Neniel

Joined: 29 Dec 2004 Posts: 147 Location: Hiding from the men in white. Contrary to common belief, psychiatrists are *very* sneaky people
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Posted: Mon Oct 24, 2005 6:07 pm Post subject: |
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| Rhapsody wrote: | | Just a curious question then.... Am I the only one who most of the times write a story on paper before I type it in word? I have so many notebooks with idea's, chapters written and so on... |
I wirte everything down on paper too first, and if I think something is any good then it gets promoted to being typed. Seeing however what little I ever get to post and considering the fact that I am now going through my 9th notebook, I'd have to say that most of the time I'm scribbling down nonsense!  _________________ Dubbed Neni by the sweet OSA raving lunatics
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NeumeIndil

Joined: 06 Jun 2005 Posts: 1084 Location: St. Louis, Missouri, USA
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Posted: Mon Oct 24, 2005 8:00 pm Post subject: |
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(Laughs at herself) I wish I had the forethought to keep "a notebook". If an idea hits, I write it down somewhere, but that might be a notebook, a paper napkin, the back of my hand, my work jeans, the margins of a text book or the shower wall with soap. My desk looks like a sticky-note factory exploded. I research in notebooks but for drafting I work on my PC just b/c I type faster than I write and it's easier to fiddle with word choice and phrasing electronically. I've noticed, though, that I write poetry by hand, and I get very strongly bound to the image and the literal nature of the subject, like Neni, fighting to evoke what I see in my head
By the way, I'm loving this thread. You've reminded me to keep an eye on the "art" in my writing, not just cannon accuracy or fulfilling the assignment. I'm with Ya on the idea of schools and the push for meeting standards to be at least partially to blame. They seem to think now that writing is a tool and only a tool and undervalue the art inherent to the fiction writing process. I always wrote for fun, as early as first and second grade (yes, I was the strange girl in the back of the room), but luckily a few of my teachers saw and appreciated the talent I had and helped me expand it rather than whittling me down to the bare bones technical crap the average high schooler in the U.S. gets by on.
My profs. now say that good readers make good writers, and they mean it in a number of ways. The fundamental one is that you learn how to craft words, the "art" of writing, by reading what's been done before and finding what worked well. In the world of commercial fiction, mimicry is more likely to sell, so that's what is encouraged. I think the old writers were so articulate and rich because their motives were different. They weren't writing to see if they could out-sell Grisham; they were writing to tell a good story or discuss social problems and injustices or because they simply couldn't not write. For the talented, it's easy to sell out and for those with a talent for parroting the genuinely talented, it's even easier. Twain, Shelley, Lovecraft, Wordsworth, heck even H.D. Thoreau, weren't necessarily out to create 'art' or make money. I would hope they were trying to tell a good story, to make people feel and think, and that, I think, is what the literary field has lost in the past fifty or so years. It's less a matter of art and more a matter of heart.
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inglor

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Posted: Tue Oct 25, 2005 8:22 am Post subject: |
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Very well said, much better than I could have.
RE: writing in school:
When I was in College we were told the biggest problem employers had with new graduates, not just from forestry but from all degrees, was... the inablility to communicate... Therefore 2 semesters of Technical writing was required. In an effort to pass standards, our schools are unqualifiing our kids for life.
Reading, Writing, 'Rithmetic have been replaced with Stanford Achievement Test _________________ Hi, My name is Inglor and I am a Tolkien Geek (sub-species: Silgeek)
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Cressida

Joined: 23 Aug 2005 Posts: 36 Location: Illinois, USA
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Posted: Tue Oct 25, 2005 8:24 am Post subject: |
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| Rhapsody wrote: | | Just a curious question then.... Am I the only one who most of the times write a story on paper before I type it in word? |
I like to write in a coffeeshop, and I don't have a laptop, so my first drafts are usually handwritten too. |
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SpaceWeavil

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Posted: Tue Oct 25, 2005 8:44 am Post subject: |
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| inglor wrote: | Very well said, much better than I could have.
RE: writing in school:
When I was in College we were told the biggest problem employers had with new graduates, not just from forestry but from all degrees, was... the inablility to communicate... Therefore 2 semesters of Technical writing was required. In an effort to pass standards, our schools are unqualifiing our kids for life.
Reading, Writing, 'Rithmetic have been replaced with Stanford Achievement Test |
It seems like the same is true over here as well, far as I can see. When I was at school I studied English up to Higher level (the equivalent of an English A Level), but when I was in primary school (5 to 11years old) we had the basics of grammar, spelling and punctuation drilled into us. We even had handwriting excercises right up to our seventh year there, where we would have to write the whole lot out again if we got even one little serif in the wrong place. We were severely discouraged from using Scots vernacular inside the classroom - we could talk as colloquially as we liked outside, but when we did our work we were told to use proper English rather than slang (for instance saying 'yes' instead of 'aye').
Some of that might sound extreme, but I fully believe that it gave me a really good base for writing / reading.
I'm often surprised though that people whose job it is to write can't master the basics of grammar and punctuation. Some of the scripts that come to me for processing for the teleprompter - the mistakes on them would make your hair curl. And these are written by people who supposedly hold degrees in English Lit, Journalism etc.
I just don't think most people see the joy of the language any more. _________________ Pervy Nazgul Fancier and owner of Fluffy the Fell Beast |
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NancyBrooke Challenge Admin
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Posted: Tue Oct 25, 2005 9:20 am Post subject: |
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From my perspective (Small-Liberal Arts-College-Educated-English-Major) I wonder if some of the fault isn't with reading, as well. As was cited above, kids don't read so much anymore. That's part of the reason Harry Potter has been such a sensation - kids were reading! After I had graduated I went back to college and sat in on a freshman english class. I wanted so much to stand behind the professor and say "Look! Here, Here and Here - that's all he's going to teach you over and over again for the next four years!" And that was to read the text, understand the text, find the moment(s) in the text that speak to you and be able to communicate why that is. Text Text Text. If you couldn't read it, you couldn't write about it.
I also want to give a shout out, as it were, to songwriters. Some of the best writing I've come across recently has been in song, Elvis Costello in particular, but I also remember being just slayed by Cheryl Wheeler as she sang "Life is short, but the days and nights are long" (I think that line is just perfect, poignant, universal, and brief) or John Prine, famously: "How the hell can a person go to work in the morning, come home every evening, and have nothing to say" and "If dreams were thunder, and lightning was desire, this house would have burnt down a long time ago."
That's the stuff drabbles are made of. _________________ NB Duchess of WHY TF Cant'chu Punctuate, First Duchess of F*&(ing &*ll yur comma placement sux!
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Yavanie

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Posted: Tue Oct 25, 2005 9:29 am Post subject: |
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| inglor wrote: | Very well said, much better than I could have.
RE: writing in school:
When I was in College we were told the biggest problem employers had with new graduates, not just from forestry but from all degrees, was... the inablility to communicate... Therefore 2 semesters of Technical writing was required. In an effort to pass standards, our schools are unqualifiing our kids for life.
Reading, Writing, 'Rithmetic have been replaced with Stanford Achievement Test |
I can so identify with this. I worked in a law office as a legal document specialist and title agent (think documents and closing papers for home mortgages).
anyway, it was my job to hire some office staff to help file paperwork, answer phones and take messages. So I brightly called the local university to send us some prelaw students or business students for some hands on temp work.
After a couple of months i fired them all. Then I started calling friends I still had at the university and asking if they knew of anyone who could spell, alphabetize or speak clearly to come interview. I did not take applications. Anyone wanting a job had to come in for a personal interview (after my work hours even) and then had 15 minutes to sit in the conference room and handwrite me a letter as to why they wanted or needed this job.
I hired the ones that seemed to know what a complete sentence was and could use the basics of punctuation and English grammar. The face to face interview determined that they could indeed distinguish between the vernacular we spoke in comfort and the formality needed for the telephones when you are commmunicating with clients and the courts.
Most of the students I hired were foreign students, here to get an education at an American university. Sometimes the language thing was a problem, but hey, accents we could work with and the Vietnamese are inerringly polite as were the Indian students.
(the students I had hired previously filed all our returned and recorded briefs alphabetically. No not by client name or even case name, but by the name of the attorney that appeared on every document - the attorney I worked for. His name was Warren King. And all the documents had been filed under W (?!?!?). Top that with for some strange reason they detached the first page from each document and filed it (under W) and left the bulk of the document in a large box under my desk (20plus pages a piece). When I discovered this it took me a month to sort them all out and match them back up - by document recording numbers because the names were all on the first page. many of the bulk documents had come loose from the staples and all 20+ pages had to be sorted and matched by recording stamp number.
In all, those students cost us way more in time, effort and money to fix their "help". _________________ Yavanie
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