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ghettoelleth
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 Posted: Thu Dec 29, 2005 7:54 am Post subject: New Circle Chapter |
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Chapter something or other of Circle of Hands is in need of a thorough grammer and punctuation betaing. You know me and commas, love/hate, love/hate. This chap also is Valar heavy and I need a no-holds-barred opinion as to how it all comes across. I want honest evaluation of the point this chapter is making as it is huge to plot so I won't be giving away all that I am trying to convey to anyone should they choose to take this on. The usual, thirteen pages, (actually rather spare for Circle), are involved. Any takers?  Hope I'm not scaring anyone off with the request for strong opinion. Thanks a bunch - G - 
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SpaceWeavil
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| Posted: Thu Dec 29, 2005 8:57 am Post subject: Re: New Circle Chapter |
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| ghettoelleth wrote: | | Chapter something or other of Circle of Hands is in need of a thorough grammer and punctuation betaing. You know me and commas, love/hate, love/hate. This chap also is Valar heavy and I need a no-holds-barred opinion as to how it all comes across. I want honest evaluation of the point this chapter is making as it is huge to plot so I won't be giving away all that I am trying to convey to anyone should they choose to take this on. The usual, thirteen pages, (actually rather spare for Circle), are involved. Any takers? Hope I'm not scaring anyone off with the request for strong opinion. Thanks a bunch - G - |
Not offended if you want to get someone else, but if you need someone, you can send it to me if you like.
Only thing is it'd be Monday by the earliest I could get it back as I'm off to Liverpool tomorrow.
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ghettoelleth
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| Posted: Thu Dec 29, 2005 9:12 am Post subject: |
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Oh, I'd love it Space except I really want to see if I can get it back quicker than that. Lemme try and if not I'll get back to you. Where the hell you been anyway??
G
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Sulriel
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| Posted: Thu Dec 29, 2005 9:30 am Post subject: |
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*glares suspiciously at Ghetto* .... isn't this the one that seriously kicked my little Artiste's as* in the MEFAs?? 
I'm no good at all on punct and grammar, but would be happy to read the chapter and comment on the plot, the point (*snicker* I can never say that without thinking of Captain Picard and Q). - if you think I could evaluate that chapter without having read the earlier chapters, send it on. - I should be able to get to it sometime today. (13 pages. - what's the word count?) (probably not until this evening tho).
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ghettoelleth
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| Posted: Thu Dec 29, 2005 9:41 am Post subject: |
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Thanks Sulriel, did I kick your but in the MEFA's? I was so shocked by all the names on the list with mine it was scary, lol. But yes this is the MEFA winner. I'll send it on to you. Shall I e-mail or PM? Lemme know at Ghettoelleth@aol.com. I'll explain what I need help with when I hear from you.
Thanks, G
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Sulriel
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| Posted: Thu Dec 29, 2005 9:53 am Post subject: |
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| Quote: | | Thanks Sulriel, did I kick your but in the MEFA's? |
ah .... yes... that would be you .... 
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