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Pen52
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 Posted: Wed Aug 02, 2006 10:21 am Post subject: Beta reader needed *gasp, the shock* |
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Hi,
I'm looking for someone to help me with my story 'To the End of Night' that I've recently posted here. There are two chapters posted that you can read here, but if someone is interested in helping me out, I can send them more chapters I have written (ten).
The story borrows elements from other fandoms (in the world that my OC's come from, vampires and demons do exist), but it's not a crossover in the strictest sense of the word. I just borrow the ambiance. I guess that, on the surface, you could file it into the 'girl falls into Middle-Earth' category, but there's more to it then that. First of, there is an actual plot behind the OC's appearance in the LOTR world. And the story will focus on canon characters and their relationships as much, if not more so, then on the OCs.
I am going to work with shifting POV system, but a POV will not change before a chapter is done. Every chapter except the prologue will be told in the form of one person’s inner monologue. You should also note that the OCs will not have any knowledge of the events in the LOTR world.
Now, I am looking for criticism. Really, I want to know if the plot doesn't work, if the characterization is flawed (or just sucks), if there is OOC behavior from the canon cast... Just an honest opinion, not sugar coated. My ego can take it (hopefully).
Any takers?
If you want to see my take on the canon cast before committing to anything, check out my shorter story titled 'Mists of time'. It's a part of 'To the End of Night', but it can stand on its own. It describes the moment when the Fellowship discovers Balin's tomb. It's from Legolas' point of view.
The link is here. At least, I hope it is.
Mists of time
http://www.openscrolls.net/fanfic/story.php?no=2866
To The End of Night
http://www.openscrolls.net/fanfic/story.php?no=2867 |
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NancyBrooke
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Joined: 11 May 2003
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Dear Pen,
I'm sorry you haven't received a response yet. You might try asking one those folks who have reviewed your story ... you know you've already got interested parties that way.
 I am out of the beta business for now as I am concentrating on my long-term as-yet unrealized fic, and my daughter is out of school, out of camp, and out of luck as Mommy's imagination suffers from permanent brain drain from trying to read all those MEFA fics!!! 
- NB (who did not get enough sleep last night ...)
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Rhapsody
Joined: 11 Apr 2004
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| Posted: Fri Aug 11, 2006 2:28 am Post subject: Re: Beta reader needed *gasp, the shock* |
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| Pen52 wrote: | | The story borrows elements from other fandoms (in the world that my OC's come from, vampires and demons do exist), but it's not a crossover in the strictest sense of the word. |
It might help a possible beta reader immensly if you mention which fandoms. Is it for example the Blade Fandom... sorry can't help (well I am not available myself as a beta currently because I have my hands quite full with loads of things)...
So a bit more info on that might help people offering assistance.
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Sulriel
Joined: 06 Jan 2004
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Location: Imladris (or maybe Texas ...)
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| Posted: Fri Aug 11, 2006 8:12 am Post subject: |
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I answered Pen privately and am doing some intial beta - slowly, as RL allows. I suspect that 'fresh eyes' will be needed in time, or someone faster with the reads and comments, so anyone else feel free to contact her here or privately. I've always found a 'circle' to be more helpful than a single reader. 
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Pen52
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| Posted: Sat Aug 19, 2006 10:56 am Post subject: |
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| Sulriel wrote: | | I answered Pen privately and am doing some intial beta - slowly, as RL allows. |
Hey there! I'm sorry I didn't respond to this sooner, but RL has been hectic, and my computer developed a mind of its own - the end result being this:
My brand new computer *beams* is much more obedient. 
Thank god for back-ups, by the way.
As Sulriel said, she has been kind enough to offer me her assistance, which I appreciate immensely.  Thank you!
Sulriel, a word of warning. I am about to cave in under the onslaught of the SSP (Shameless self-promotion) syndrome. You might want to cover your eyes... 
| Quote: | | I suspect that 'fresh eyes' will be needed in time, or someone faster with the reads and comments, so anyone else feel free to contact her here or privately. I've always found a 'circle' to be more helpful than a single reader. |
A fresh perspective is always welcome. *sigh* All that build-up and now this. *grumbles* Disappointing. I wish I had a better sales-pitch. 
My attempts at humor aside, help would be appreciated.
| Quote: | | It might help a possible beta reader immensely if you mention which fandoms |
Both 'Blade' and 'BTVS' fandoms. But, as I said, no previous knowledge is required to read (or beta ) the story. The characters (not counting the LOTR cast) will mostly be OC-s (good ones, I hope), so there should be no problem with following the plot.
Anyone who would like to, can contact me via PM or respond on this topic.
Thank you, NancyBrooke and Rhapsody for responding. I appreciate it. |
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