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Hey all, is any body interested in reveiwing story for me?

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Dragontamer77

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Posted: Tue Sep 05, 2006 8:50 am Post subject: Hey all, is any body interested in reveiwing story for me?

Hey, I am in need of some critique for a story I'm writing. Slightly disheartened as I only have one review!! The first chapter is all thats posted right now, but I've got the second ready for posting. Title:What is Sadness? in femme fatale Thanks!!

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Dragontamer77

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Posted: Wed Sep 06, 2006 1:41 pm Post subject: Hey

Also forgot to mention....she is not a Mary Sue. She sounds like it, but the second chapter tells you she is anything but. I gotta post that one....

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Dragontamer77

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Posted: Wed Sep 27, 2006 3:40 pm Post subject:

3rd chapter added! _________________ Hey, Merry! Lets skip rocks across the......uh oh. My Karma just ran over your dogma Illiterate? Write for help. To be sure of hitting the target, shoot first and call whatever you hit the target.

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Posted: Wed Sep 27, 2006 5:26 pm Post subject:

Go on... use the "Promote your own story" thread that every one else uses . _________________ Rob www.crackingegg.com

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