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Rous
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 Posted: Mon Apr 05, 2004 8:18 pm Post subject: Bored out of your gourd?? |
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I am looking for a beta for a not so short story. 18 Chapters, so far. This is my first fiction, I have done lots of Poems. Grammar and spelling pretty well fixed, just really want input on storyline. It is probably an A/U, although listed elsewhere as more bookverse.
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Monaleoht
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| Posted: Sat Apr 24, 2004 6:20 am Post subject: INFO NEEDED!?! |
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Before I make a choice, can you give some more information on the story... characters, type of plot ect.... please? Thanks  |
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Rous
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It is AU. Characters: Elves from Imladris and Lórien. OFC from new culture. Elves raise a young half Elven half Indrel (original culture) girl. Have a direction for the original story. Not sure about the rewrite. Original-she has a part in the destruction of the Ring, but not with the fellowship and takes nothing away from them. There is one attempted rape scene and some character death. So far, no sex. Grammar and spelling are not an issue. Opinion is more what I am looking for. It is eighteen chapter so far. I am just not happy with the direction. If you want to chech out the original it is posted at <coucilofelrond.com> under fanfic under this name. Rewrite is at 90 some pages at this time. And going to be longer than original. Original is in excess of 150. Any other questions? I really do not know what to say. If you read it there, comment back here. It is too involved getting to the reviews on that site.
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