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MaidenGreenleaf



Joined: 29 Sep 2004
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Location: I'm with the Elves if ya need me.

PostPosted: Fri Oct 15, 2004 7:53 pm    Post subject: I need a beta, please. Reply with quote

This is my first story. It's called 'Far From Home'. I need some help with it!!! OSA says I need to change some of my use of words to more Tolkienized word usage. So PLEASE help me!!!!

It's about a girl from our time coming into Middle Earth. She meets the Fellowship of the Ring a little while after they've started their quest.

Characters: Fellowship; Roxanne(OC)

It has three chapters so far. It's not very long though. So it shouldn't be that hard of a task.

Thank you for your help!!! I really appreaciate it. PM me if you are willing to help. Thank you again.
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phoenixqueen



Joined: 15 Apr 2004
Posts: 61
Location: Florida

PostPosted: Sat Oct 16, 2004 10:04 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I might be interested in helping you beta-read, but I'd need to know more about the story. Is it a Mary-Sue? That means, are you essentially putting yourself into the story, or is it a character that is only there to fall in love with Aragorn/Legolas/Gimli/Frodo/etc..?

Is there going to be romance? If it is, I may not be the best person to help you, cause I suck when it comes to helping in the romance department.

You can email me at phoenixqueen101@yahoo.com since I am not a frequent checker of this site this semester...I have too much to do!

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Texasgirl



Joined: 18 Oct 2004
Posts: 895
Location: Texas (no shit, sherlock)

PostPosted: Fri Oct 29, 2004 5:02 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

heyy there girl -

if you need a beta, i'm game. drop me a PM and we can talk. you're story sounds interesting, and it will take me away from mucking stalls - YAY! no seriously though, i'd be happy to do it.

adios amiga,
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