Reviews by sofia

Okay, NOW Panic! · Sun Aug 27, 2006 9:32 am

Finally finished catching up! Great story. I must say I do love all the titles you've come up with. Both from the orginal and the sequel. They are so unique and individual and I love them!
Anyway... I have to say, I'm rooting for a bit or romance with Penny and Halladan... or at least a very very very good friendship, which I think you are establishing already.

Lim Aear · Wed Aug 23, 2006 8:01 am

finally caught up on the chapters that you've posted since chapter 6, I believe, and the first thing I gotta say is MORE MORE MORE!...
But I also have to say, you should be studying for your exams!
Great chapters. I love how you had them in Legeolas' room and when Elaine realized it she's all panic-y but Legolas is like '???'. haha.
And I also have to wonder... how long are you gonna keep these two apart? But nonetheless I love the tension and...lust... between them.

Lim Aear · Wed Aug 02, 2006 4:30 pm

ah, I have to say I loved the opening diary entrance. It was so very... different. For some reason or another I could totally picture an actual narrator from a play (or something) saying it on a stage. Crazy smiley face

Don't ask, because I don't know where that image came from, but I liked it.

Damn her impulses to act like a drama queen in some romantic movie.

^Brilliant last line by the way.

Don't Panic! · Sat Jul 29, 2006 6:22 pm

To be perfectly honest with you, I had seen this story a few times- in searches and in other authors favorites lists and such- but never brought myself to read it- until a few days ago.
I must say I do love it. Loved the realism (though thats what you were striving for to begin with). I actually cried on that last chapter, with the whole Halbarad leaving and never being seen alive again. And I always love stories that can make me feel emotions like that Wink smiley face

I must say I will start reading the sequel really soon, probably later today.
Though I have to say to you (not trying to be a flame, so please don't take it as such) that it was sometimes hard to follow. Ahh- I shouldn't say hard, it wasn't hard to follow but it wasn't as easy as breathing. Anywho- POV's changed and tenses also. I do that in my stories too so I'm not trying to be a hypocrit, but sometimes it got confusing. For example sometimes you'd have a paragraph or two that would follow Halbarad and then suddenly it would shift into something he had done the day before or earlier that day, and then just as suddenly shift back to the present, and then the POV would shift to Penny; although this didn't make the story any less enjoyable.
Anyway, thats what I noticed and nice job on an amazing story.

Lim Aear · Sat Jul 29, 2006 4:46 pm

ah, they are smitten with each other, or at least thats what I gather.

Lim Aear · Tue Jul 25, 2006 5:46 pm

The last two chapters were great. And of course Legolas comes to her rescue!
I loved the descriptions of the underground city place. But of course you end the last chapter as a cliffhanger!
And since my elvish is terrible as well, what did Legolas say? Or will we as readers find that out in future chapters?
And by the by, I've been looking at the manga drawings you had posted on LJ and I have to say... OH MY GOSH! Those are amazing. Truly... I just... Kneel, Suckers smiley face

I can't even come up with reasonable compliments!

Lim Aear · Mon Jul 24, 2006 8:34 am

Oh silly me, I had left you a PM from when you reviewed my story and I asked when you would update. But I only checked after I had already sent you the PM to find that indeed you have updated.
I do like the descriptions of the underground lake-home-place. I can already picture it as an elegant place.

Lim Aear · Tue Jul 18, 2006 4:44 pm

That was nice. I liked the part where she's listening to the music and can hear elves singing, just imagining makes it seem... i don't even have a word for it... oh well. Rolling Eyes smiley face

Congrats on posting your first fic! I was the same. I read stories here but it took myself some time to actually join and post my own attempt. (Though sadly its been left alone for a long time and has only 3 chapters completed, only one of which is posted on this site) Anywho, I do look forward to reading the next installments.
Just thought I'd tell you that other members of this site are usually very nice and helpful. I haven't come across any flamers (though I guess others have) and most members give you advice and tell you what they like and don't understand instead of a quick "thats awesome. update soon, bye!" (though those aren't bad getting, its nice to get a review with a little more in it.)
I'll stop my rambling right now but I might continue it with my next review.
Good luck!

The Battle of the Blood · Mon Jul 10, 2006 5:18 pm

That was amazing. Truly, it was. As others have requested, you should expand on this story. I know I would follow it.
Your writing is fantastic and lovely and the fact that you created a character who has a speech impediment and a facial deformity is not something I have seen before in any other story.
Well Done! Heart smiley face

Gratitude · Sun Apr 30, 2006 6:57 pm

I first read this story a think about a year ago or so but never left a review (who knows why?) Who doesn't love some elf smut.
I have to join Elentari on her chorus : HELL YEAH
I don't want to get on your nerves but is the next installment far off or close?

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