Reviews by Daeuial

The Cursed Queen of Angmar · Fri Dec 24, 2004 1:09 am

*wild applause*
Yes! You updated! Woo-hoo! : D
A really good chapter, as always. I love the fact that I'm getting the warm fuzzies from the reunion scene. You've really made a whole new characterization for the Witch-King. And yet, it makes sense. I absolutely love it. Will definitely be sticking around to see what happens next.

Elanor's Revenge · Sat Nov 27, 2004 12:28 pm

*cheers* A great chapter, with wonderful, sweet interaction between Elanor and Haldir, and all these little hints as to what will soon come to pass are driving me crazy! [but in a good way ^__^]

Also, it was very satisfying to see Lurien get his. Twisted Evil smiley face

Thanks for an entertaining chapter, can't wait for the next one.

Castamir's Heir · Sun Nov 07, 2004 5:47 pm

Arrgh, these characters are so frustratingly secretive....>__<
But I love them anyway. *grins* Thanks for writing this short fic. But now that I've read this one, and the other, really long one, I have no more stories featuring Inglor and Haleth. I think I'm going through withdrawal. Sad smiley face

I hope you write some more soon.

Pitfalls of the Palantir · Sun Nov 07, 2004 5:29 pm

Oh, this is a magnificent story. I had felt compelled to review earlier, but I had desperately wanted to continue reading, so I resolved to review at the end. I'm glad I did. If I had reviewed earlier, I would have been going on about how funny it was, and it is hilarious, but it is so much more. I have never read such a compelling fanfiction with original characters as the the main protagonists. The plot was simple enough, but the characters are complex and interesting, and I can't get enought of them. The humor was very well done and I just want to print this story out and have it bound so I can read it on the subway. It's brilliant. Really, you should change the place names and titles and just sell this as an original story. I would buy it. My only nitpick is as a Lord of the Rings fanfiction, King Elessar was consistently referred to as King Estel. That is incorrect, because Estel was the name he was called as a child and teenager until Elrond told him of his heritage and his true name. After he became king he was referred to in records as Elessar Telcontar and King Elessar in person. I don't know if the name Estel was known to others outside of his family and anyone else who might have known him at a young age, but it seems unlikely that people would be calling him 'King Estel' to me. If there is an explanation, feel free to tell me. Anyway, that is a very minor detail. It did not detract from the story at all, it is still one of my favorites. And the ending was great too. Good job. I hope to see more from you in the future.

Trust To Hope, Book Two · Fri Nov 05, 2004 7:36 pm

Oh, I had no idea that there was a book two..*feels like a dork* But I'm glad now that I have 'discovered' it. I was wondering why the first one never seemed to get updated...>__<
Anyway, ooh that skanky Willa is getting on my nerves! I am soo not surprised that she would pull a stunt like that. God, I wonder who she drugged up and assaulted to get pregnant. Anyway, as you can see I'm completely wrapped up in your story, which is well written and extremely sweet and heartwarming to read. [Except for the skanky Willa parts.] I've always loved the fact that you took a canon pairing and fleshed it out and made it your own. And with such style! *applauds* Keep up the good work, and I'll be back for the next chappie.

Elanor's Revenge · Thu Sep 16, 2004 11:15 am

Oh, this story is great. It's so sweet and funny! I'm still laughing about the way Rumil woke up:

“Now you are going to pretend you did not know it was me?” she said scathingly. “Do you truly expect me to believe you would fondle the Vala Elbereth’s backside?”

Hee. Oh, and Haldir's Hand-Warming technique gave me the giggles too. I love this story! I think I shall make a pamphlet or something for that one. I'll post it to the Yahoo group when it's done. Thanks for another entertaining chapter.

Tel' Lindar (The Bard) · Fri Sep 10, 2004 2:54 pm

Yes! More Middle-earth characters! I can't wait for the next chapter. Not that it hasn't been intriguing, entertaining, and hot so far, but I couldn't be happier to see the Imladris crew making an extended [hopefully!] appearance. And I can't wait to hear how Elrohir and Elladan survived for this long without succumbing to sea-longing and going to Valinor. Hmm...my brain is full of possibilities, but I think I'll wait for yours. Thanks for the new chapter!

Daeuiel

Tel' Lindar (The Bard) · Thu Jul 22, 2004 3:50 am

Chapter 24 was lovely. I enjoy all the Slytherin interaction, but I would kind of like to see more active searching for the bow? I know that's probably going to have to wait until the end of the school year, though....It's okay if you have RL stuff to take care of--thanks for posting this chapter, I was dying for it. My question is, are you going to post the allegedly completed Chapter 25 before or after your extended hiatus from fic writing? Perhaps you said this in the preamble to Chapter 24, but I'd like to hear it in more obvious terms...

Daeuiel

Trust To Hope · Wed May 26, 2004 9:48 pm

Nooo! Wicked cliffhanger! But I love this story, and I'll live. I think. But really, why didn't Homegirl [Ani] just take the proof she had to her father? Admittedly, this is much more exciting than Fenwick just being banished from Dol Amroth, but still, it's like reading Harry Potter--you just wish the protagonist would get a clue and speak to an authority figure for once. And yet, this does not detract from the story at all, it just makes it even more tense. So really, I'm not complaining, I'm biting my fingernails and cursing at my computer screen in an oddly expressed delight. No wonder the tenants think I'm weird. Anyway, it was another great chapter in an immensely entertaining story, and I'm pining away for the next chapter already. Bounce smiley face

Adventures in Baking · Tue Apr 27, 2004 2:49 am

Pointless fluff? No. A wonderful interlude into the relationship we never get to see past the starting point? Yes. As a Faramir fan, I love this story. As an Eowyn fan, I want to marry it. *glomps Author* Shame it isn't part of a twelve-part series. 'Day in the life of' or something. This is just how I imagined them. Faramir's character is completely appropriate, and yet we all hope that he will process the fact that his father was not himself in the end...It is difficult to forget the words of a parent, even if they aren't true. *sighs, releases author slowly and backs away* Ah, well. A job well done.

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