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Allegiance Torn (Drabble) (G)
by Rous.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [4]
Warnings [None]
Tue Sep 06, 2005 2:00 pm
Oooo interesting! I like this Rous. An ambitious Celeborn and you leave it undecided if it was true love or not. Excellent!
 
 
Paradox of the Fourth Age (NC-17)
by Alassante.
Chapters [29]
Reviews [118]
Warnings [character death, graphic battle scenes, sex]
Fri Sep 02, 2005 5:12 am
Shocked smiley face Holy.... I have been doing a lot of reading this year and this is one of the most excellent stories I have read so far. From the first to the last word: I found it hard to put down. I just couldn't stop reading, I dragged the pages to every spot where I could sit down to read.

Your story telling technique is extremely good (pacing, plotlines and plotdevices all Thumb smiley face ). Within the prologue you strip away all beacons of hope, leaving the reader what on earth can happen to turn the tide. At the same time you build a new world (yes Valinor is Tolkien's creation, but what do we know about it regarding the visual?) in such splendid detail and in a very believable manner. That is just one of the things I liked. What I do like as well are the parallels in time, they might occur as simple flashback, but the layers Al.... they truly stunned me. Just wow... Shocked smiley face

You take your time to build up your characters and you don't step into the pitfall to make them too perfect (although your male elves... yum). I do care for every character, you write them with so much love and care. Each character has such an emotional impact on the story, your main character and.. the reader. And I do want to know more about every side character: as a writer you know what your readers need.

I ran out of tissues when I read how Laurëanna and Elrohir parted... dang that was good. *snif*

I told you before: you have a natural gift of writing and please keep on spoiling us with your excellent stories!

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Last edited by Rhapsody on Fri Sep 02, 2005 5:15 am
 
Morning in Osgiliath (G)
by Cressida.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [5]
Fri Aug 26, 2005 4:41 pm
Oh, and we all know what Faramir dreamt about! Beautifully written and the bond between them is touching here.
 
 
Chrr (G)
by Vilwarin.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [7]
Fri Aug 26, 2005 4:39 pm
LOL! The dialogue is fantastic! Witty Arwen making the best out of it. Thumb smiley face
 
 
Rank (PG)
by NancyBrooke.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [10]
Fri Aug 26, 2005 4:37 pm
I love it! *grin* The reactions of both Boromir and Denethor are so natural written.

A great job with this one Nancy!!!
 
 
And Rohan Will Answer! (G)
by isilelensar.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [3]
Warnings [none]
Thu Aug 25, 2005 1:30 am
Oh! Beautiful! I can just see them standing there, waiting for the final words and the big run down on Pellenor fields!
 
 
Celeborn and Galadriel Speak...sort-of (R)
by inglor.
Chapters [12]
Reviews [27]
Warnings [Some Crude humor and implied naughtiness]
Tue Aug 16, 2005 2:21 pm
Oh my goodness.... LOL I love this piece of mindspeech between Galadriel and Celeborn. Excellent Very Happy smiley face
 
 
Last Hope (G)
by LadyBluejay.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [3]
Sun Aug 14, 2005 1:14 pm
Unusual for you maybe, but you captured the moment very well. The eagles swooping in for the rescue. Thumb smiley face
 
 
Hope Lost (G)
by Shanalir.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [5]
Warnings [none]
Sun Aug 14, 2005 1:13 pm
Simply excellent! I like the way you approached it, the despair of Sauron. Well done. Thumb smiley face
 
 
Hope's Adieu (G)
by ExquisiteElf.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [2]
Warnings [None]
Sun Aug 14, 2005 12:52 pm
oh excellent! Haunting even! A perfect portrayal about the day Aragorn left for the Paths of the Death. Thumb smiley face
 
 
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