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The Rest is Silence (NC-17)
by SpaceWeavil.
Chapters [7]
Reviews [ 25] Warnings [sexual content]
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Wed Nov 17, 2004 2:15 pm
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Ditto...
I really liked the turmoil in Thranduil. Great Romantic Elf Smut. I like your physical descriptions, it left enough to the imagination without being technical and added to the romantic air. And Istel actually has a heart...
Excellent, excellent work
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The Other Day... (G)
by SpaceWeavil.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 13] Warnings [technically character death]
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Tue Nov 09, 2004 3:22 pm
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| Very haunting. Mission accomplished. I've seen this done through Elf eyes, but who better to see this through than Ent eyes. |
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Gaming (NC-17)
by NancyBrooke.
Chapters [5]
Reviews [ 13] Warnings [Graphic, consensual sex; possibly offensive langua]
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Fri Nov 05, 2004 2:00 pm
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I am in awe of your skill with imagery. They way you visually described the characters helped with their chacterizations.
A very enjoyable and stimulating read. Both *THAT* way and thoughtfully 
Inglor |
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Cold Comfort (NC-17)
by Sharpeslass.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 8] Warnings [strong sexual content]
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Fri Nov 05, 2004 10:57 am
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After reading this again, I am impressed even more. How you have captured Grima's tortured soul, how he strives for recognition, how he relishes his small petty victories. I think your Grima is straight out of the book.
And how you captured the utter hopelessness of the girl, truly depressing. I actually pitied her and it made me think of others so down cast. I think your ending is superb in its realism
Inglor |
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Aftermath of Fire (G)
by Aerlinnel.
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Wed Nov 03, 2004 9:48 am
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A very satisfying AU. You capture Celebrimbor's angst about his heritage, and I like how you have expanded on the subtle hints the professor left us. Your descriptions are just perfect, detailed enough to draw a picture without being overly wordy. As a Silm/UT fan, I liked reading something with just enough scholarly details to be stimulating and add credibility.
I think you cold have expanded the Celibrimbor/Galadriel dynamics a bit more. Other than that little nitpick, I thoroughly enjoyed this.
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"Eighteen Hours In Minas Tirith" (NC-17)
by miranda.
Chapters [3]
Reviews [ 11] Warnings [heavy on happiness, light on angst]
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Fri Oct 29, 2004 5:02 pm
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I am speechless. The characters, the fun stuff, the emotion between the couple, everything was done perfectly. This goes in my "How to write Stuff" file. The love between the two was so well detailed. CRAP, I can't find the right words to give this enough credit. There is absolutely nothing to critique in this. Perfect just doesn't describe it.
The intimacy was beyond perfect, just enough detail to be imagined but not too much to be smutty and still unbliebably hot.
This also goes in the "To Read Lots More Times" file.
Here Endeth The Gush.
Inglor |
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The Rest is Silence (NC-17)
by SpaceWeavil.
Chapters [7]
Reviews [ 25] Warnings [sexual content]
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Fri Oct 15, 2004 4:09 pm
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Ah, cracks in the ice. Nice chapter
Inglor |
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The Rest is Silence (NC-17)
by SpaceWeavil.
Chapters [7]
Reviews [ 25] Warnings [sexual content]
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Thu Oct 14, 2004 12:50 pm
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Not what I was expecting... AT ALL
A pox on your house for that cliffhanger. I found myself saying "no... he won't do it" and banging my hands on the table when he did.
The battlefield descriptions were uncanny.
By your skill, I can perfectly visualize and empathize with Thranduil. And now I'm completely involved and care about what happens to the characters.
That slurping sound you hear is me being sucked into this WIP.
Inglor |
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Last edited by inglor on Thu Oct 14, 2004 1:01 pm |
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Cold Are Those Tools (G)
by Noldo.
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Thu Oct 14, 2004 12:01 pm
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Sorry, double post
Inglor |
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Last edited by inglor on Thu Oct 14, 2004 12:05 pm |
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Cold Are Those Tools (G)
by Noldo.
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Thu Oct 14, 2004 12:00 pm
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Moralanqua said
> This has so much potential! You write it beautifully but you are speeding through it too quickly and your readers are being left behind. Please slow it down and explore the range more.
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> The rebirth aspect is an interesting one to go with. It raises lots of interesting questions that I hope you will explore and answer! Wonderful idea here! This is one to watch!
Nothing to add, Mora pretty well summed it up and I am of the same opinions
Inglor |
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