Reviews by greywonderer

A Diamond In The Storm · Tue Nov 02, 2004 2:34 am

Oh so much more satisfying than the other version. LOL Your extras were well worth logging in over here to read. Very steamy and very in keeping with the rest of their firery romance. I applaud this chapter and now I have the urge to go out and have a quick smoke even though I don't smoke. LOlL Well done!

The Hidden Days of Healing · Sat Oct 30, 2004 2:12 am

I enjoyed your story very much. I loved what you did with Sam and how you let him vent his anger. I also enjoyed how well you incorperated the healing sleep into the story, but still showed what led to it being necessary. The bravery that they all displayed and the self-sacraficing that was done was very well written. Lovely story. I enjoyed it very much.

A Diamond In The Storm · Fri Oct 29, 2004 1:43 am

Just loved it all and especially this line: ( he shoved the last wisps of remembered terror and hopelessness away, clinging to the rock of his cousin’s presence and the promise of Diamond’s eyes.)

I love how determined Pippin is to win Diamond over and how hard she has been fighting this though she does seem to be giving ground just slightly. I like the way you write her as a strong character in her own right and not just a lass waiting for a proper marriage.
It's a great story and I am still enjoying this very much. As always, I look forward to more.

Grey_wonderer

A Diamond In The Storm · Fri Oct 22, 2004 1:48 am

Wonderful! I loved Pippin's resolve against the wizard and the fact that the tree roots claimed the wizard while Pippin won the staff. Now, I wonder what damage the encounter has caused to Pippin's mind if any. I also hope that Merry and Diamond were able to save the hobbits from the fires. Can't wait for more!

A Diamond In The Storm · Sun Aug 15, 2004 9:05 pm

I was so glad to see another chapter of this up. This is a great story and I am enjoying it very much. I am glad that Pippin managed to hold onto the wizard's staff. I was also glad to see that Merry was managing to save the children from the fire. Now, I am looking forward to what will happen between Diamond and Pippin. Great story!

Grey_wonderer

A Diamond In The Storm · Wed Jul 28, 2004 1:41 am

This was wonderful! Loved Merry's face off with Diamond and Pippin's inability to hold still while trapped by the vines. I am wondering about this person called River. Very interesting and I can't wait for more.

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