Reviews by Cuthalion

For All Things a Cost · Mon May 22, 2006 12:09 am

Great and very original. Brava!

She Bids Me Call Thee · Thu May 11, 2006 2:19 am

Your favorite hobbit? Is there any hobbit in that tale...? *grins* And yes, I do indeed think that they should have their happy ending... but you might add some angst by unfolding what happens in Edoras during the Ring War a little bit further. That scene with Éowyn, Théoden and Gríma was wonderful, and I would like to see more of this.

And the Inn (and Morwen and her folks there) might be affected by the darkening of Meduseld. Simply some drama before they ride into the sunset together, yes? And it might even be difficult for Gamling's fellow Rohirrim to deal with the fact that Gamling intends to wed a whore...? (Háma's mistrust would be a clear symptom...)

She Bids Me Call Thee · Sat May 06, 2006 7:36 am

My beyuty,

I will be heer at nuun to cee that yuu re well. Rest ontil then.

Gamling

*melts to a helpless puddle of glee*

My, this is marvelous. Dark times and dark men, dangerous moments, a sick Morwen (awww, poor darling!), and a strong and caring Gamling. And this letter!

*melts a little bit more*

Antiphon to Light · Thu May 04, 2006 1:34 am

Nothing of interest to you," Gimli replied, softening the rebuke by patting Pippin's knee. "Unless you, too, are thinking about our most wondrous host. Vrâlsfire," he murmured reverently.

Wonderful. I know very few stories that really try to explore a dwarvish mind, and you succeeded masterfully. I would love to translate this into german, if you allow, and I would also like to nominate this for the MEFA's this year. Wonderfully done.

Cúthalion

Oh - and here you can see what I already translated for my german readers:

http://www.cuthalionsbogen.de/stories.html

She Bids Me Call Thee · Tue May 02, 2006 6:56 am

*swallows laboriously*

Ohhhh... damn, woman, and now you tempt me to fill that gap in between the moment when they entered the chamber to when Morwen lay sated on her bed. *fans herself and silently curses her own heated imagination*

Brilliant. Sizzling hot. And sooooo yummy!

Captain · Sat Apr 29, 2006 8:01 am

Grim, wise and clever; it rings absolutely true. Very good.

Fun with Farm'n · Tue Apr 25, 2006 12:22 am

Bah! Nasssty beast!

*laughs*

No, honestly - that was good. Poor farmer.

Revenge is a dish best served cold · Sat Apr 22, 2006 2:59 pm

Hehe. I'm giggling again while reading this; Amrothos deserves every single bit of this thorough and appropriate revenge. Wonderfully done - but you know that already, don't you?

She Bids Me Call Thee · Wed Apr 19, 2006 2:29 pm

See, this is the reason why I love this tale so enormously: An intimate lovestory, mixed with the dark foreshadowing of future events (the idea that Gríma poisoned the aged king by giving him a strange "medicine" is intrigueing!), and as the cream on the cake that wonderful, sizzling hot erotic scene at the end. You have created two wonderful lovers here, and you are a great storyteller, my dear.

*bows in deep respect*

Cúthalion

Heralded By Storms · Mon Apr 17, 2006 1:15 pm

I’m not entirely sure, darling,” he whispered, though she slept, “but I think I may have at last got your father’s blessing… Though I’d never have thought it would be won by an ill sung bawdy.”

I praise you with great praise, dear. What a wonderful tale this is - and my heart is with poor Eglantine, for I know pretty well how she feels. And with Esmeralda, too, for she has to carry a burden she should not have to. And the scene with Esmie's father is as marvelous and dreamlike as a piece from Shakespeare's "Summer Night's Dream". Are you sure he is not Puck? *smiles*

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