Reviews by lorienbabe

The Power in That Tiny Hand · Fri Jan 21, 2005 6:28 pm

This is beautiful. I have always loved The Empty Vessel, despite its quirks and its 'is it au or is it canon'? Honestly, I don't care. It is a beautiful story of a wonderful relationship and this fits in perfectly with it. Apparently Zee considered it a gift and I do to. Elf elfling = many aws.

Haldir and Elzabeth : Healing · Fri Jan 21, 2005 6:10 pm

This is very sweet however there are few problems. It moves too quickly, to quirky. The flow just kinda jerks you along. There are several difficult things that makes this fic harder to sell- Haldir leaving a battle to tend to his lover is one. Her name is another. If she is an elf, she really needs an elvish name to make it more believable. With some work and more length, this could be very nice. You might want to read some really well written fics to see how they set up. I can recommend a few if you like. PM me.

by the way, anyone who leaves a 1 star review, and no explanation, is a coward. (If they PM'd you, that's different. ) Please don't let it hinder you. I like how much he loves her.

Rider of the Mark · Mon Dec 13, 2004 4:36 pm

i'm not 'confuzzled' a bit. This is a lovely piece of work, giving depth and development to a character so easily seen as 'simple'. I applaud your effort. You are an amazing story teller. Why in all of Arda are you giving it away for free?

Weed Dreams · Sat Nov 13, 2004 11:41 pm

very funny. I love your Haldir. It has to be one of the best characterzations of him I have ever seen

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