Reviews by VanatheEverYoung

Paradox of the Fourth Age · Sat Jun 04, 2005 5:41 pm

That first chapter was scary. That's a story unto itself. I'm so impressed, Alassante! I love what you have up, and I can't wait to read about what happens now. I admit that I'm skeptical about the turn-back-time aspect of the plot, but I think you've handled it logically enough. I get the impression that Iluvatar is going to be handling that, and since he is The One, I guess he can do whatever he likes. Please update soon.

And in the Darkness Bind Them: Vol I · Sat Jun 04, 2005 12:06 am

I was so happy to see an update e-mail in my mail box! I really liked this new chapter. The language was a nice blend between old and modern, and the formality set the tone perfectly. I can't wait to read more about Naltimir (sp?). He's a smooth talker, a very nice candidate for Mouth of Sauron. I wouldn't have interpreted his character that way, but now that I read it, it fits perfectly.

Interrupted Journeys: Part Three--Journeys Begin · Thu Jun 02, 2005 10:53 pm

Agh! I can't take it anymore! My eyes are so bloodshot that my family is expressing concern. I hate computer screens! Smash smiley face

I'll have to come read the last three chapters later.

I'm very impressed you've shown that Elves are not perfect beings. The idea of traitorous Elves isn't the typical characterisation, but it is nonetheless canonical. It takes a thick skin to write about imperfect Elves. I congratulate you for that.

I love little Legolas. Some of his character is already showing in his slightly rebellious nature, but respect for his father. From the little dialogue he has in the books (because Captain Obvious is so different than book-verse Legolas Rolling Eyes smiley face

), I would agree that this is his relationship with Thranduil.

I'll be back later to finish what you have posted.

Music of the Woods · Thu Jun 02, 2005 1:53 am

I've always sided with Gimli when thinking about Fangorn. I could never quite grasp what Legolas found so fascinating (other than Ents, that is). You've captured Legolas's connection with the trees very well, and I think I might understand a little bit of what he sees when he looks at the old and angry forest.

First Anarchist · Thu Jun 02, 2005 1:50 am

I always like looking at well known scenes from a new perspective. I think this is the one and only time I could enjoy a glimpse into the mind of Melkor Razz smiley face

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Interrupted Journeys: Part Two--Journeys Perforce · Tue May 31, 2005 10:38 pm

Another wonderful story, Ellisk. And again, I have to take a break. If my eyes weren't bloodshot, I could have managed this in one sitting, but ... Smash smiley face

What's struck me most so far is how connected I feel to the OCs, namely Aradunnon. Romances between secondary characters, both OCs, is usually a pet peeve of mine. However, you've kept the scene concise and given them depth within the overall framework of the fic. Also, Thranduil's inner conflicts are wonderfully portrayed. I love that you've drawn so much from Unfinished Tales. I adore that book.

Again, wonderful job. I can't wait for my vision to focus again so I can read some more.

Payback · Tue May 31, 2005 9:53 pm

Sounds like you've had a lot of experience with sibling rivalry. That was a perfect ending!

Danse Macabre · Mon May 30, 2005 7:25 pm

This is a great interpretation of "Dance." It felt like I was reading so much more than 100 words. You've such a great grasp on emotive language.

Last Dance · Mon May 30, 2005 7:17 pm

Very good! I liked the twist at the end. I'm amazed at how creative these drabbles can be in only 100 words. Gollum and the Ring is a great example of a dance.

Unrequited Invitation · Mon May 30, 2005 7:15 pm

Aw, poor Pippin. I've always been sensitive to Pippin's moments of shame since Gandalf said he should throw himself into a bottomless well. Poor little hobbit Sad smiley face

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