Reviews by molokai

The Empty Vessel · Thu Oct 16, 2003 12:21 am

Whoa Baby!!! Exclamation smiley face

That was GOOD!

With an ending like that, I actually didn't mind that it's FIN. I didn't expect it (HE is a descendant...HA!) but it sure did close the circle nicely. Wow! Yeah, I'm speechless.

I'm now trying to convince my husband to read it. He's a techy as one can get but he just hasn't warmed up to the idea of reading a story online. Sad smiley face

I'm almost tempted to print it out except the page count did say 728 on MS Word. Confused smiley face

Hmmm, maybe if I delete some paragraph breaks...decrease the font...

You have a great talent for storytelling. I'm glad you shared it with us. I'd like to echo SingerAngel's sentiments about if you ever publish a novel...PLEASE let us know. I think you already have a fanbase, and you can consider me as one of your fans. Looking forward to reading "Strokin'" and any other stories you may have up your sleeves. Very Happy smiley face

Take Care,
Ermina Wink smiley face

Forgotten Allies · Wed Jul 30, 2003 12:39 am

What a heart wrenching story!!! I've been putting off reading your work because I wasn't sure about "Alternate Universe". But this was so moving especially at the end....imagine me in front of my monitor with tears down my cheeks and frequently looking behind me to make sure my husband doesn't happen to sneak up on me. Thank you for sharing your talent. I'm looking forward to reading more of your other works.

The Empty Vessel · Mon Jul 28, 2003 9:35 pm

Chapter 19 was beautiful. I agree with Hathor, the rose from Duncan was quite touching. Can't wait for the next chapters. This is one story I wish won't end for awhile. I can see them having to deal with cravings, the birth, diapers, teething, toddlerhood, disciplining, and eventually maybe raging hormones of teenagers.

By Previous Arrangement · Thu Jul 24, 2003 11:20 pm

The only thing I hate is having to wait for the next chapter. It sure brings me to the edge of my seat. This story is sure is a tease. Seriously, I love the story; it brings back the memories of my first time with my husband (okay maybe a little too much info) so I can sympathize with Lothiriel. PLEASE write soon.

Sun and Shadow · Thu Jul 17, 2003 6:15 pm

PLEASE write more and soon. I love the pace of the story. I can just imagine where Legolas got his looks and character. Your version of Thranduil is the person I prefer the most from those I've read so far...gentle yet strong.

The Empty Vessel · Thu Jul 17, 2003 5:07 pm

Oh Chapter 16 was so GOOD! Especially the scene with Bronywn's heels and the king's foot. You go girl! I wish someone could draw her in THE DRESS. I'm so looking forward to the next chapter.

And the Sky Full of Stars · Wed Jul 16, 2003 1:07 am

B-E-A-U-T-I-F-U-L! I love the pace. The romance developed quite nicely. I truly enjoyed how the friendship grew between Legolas and Elesia ...and without smut. Your story was my first experience of Valinor. I'm sad it had to end. Thank you for sharing your gift of writing.

Only Time · Mon Jul 07, 2003 3:47 pm

Please CONTINUE. I can't wait for the next chapters. This is good stuff.

The Princess and the King · Sun Jul 06, 2003 10:32 pm

I'm hooked!!! It's humorous but endearing. Please write soon. I'm hoping you don't get writer's block. You have a gift...thanks for sharing your talent.

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