Reviews by Elennare

Daughter Of Rohan · Sat Jan 15, 2005 7:41 pm

Glad to see you back.

From your new chapeter, I very much sense a change in the family dynamic on the horizon. Very interesting...
I think the formatting is screwing around though, it's appearing in half page width and some of the style changes are not working at all.

Please keep persevering, the WB will pass.

The Silver Serpent's Kiss · Fri Sep 03, 2004 1:50 pm

A very unusual idea, my curiousity has been touroughly roused. I hope this will be as epic as you plan.

As for all those warnings in the intro... just makes it all the more promising (far to many people hide the gory, visceral bits). Twisted Evil smiley face

Daughter Of Rohan · Fri Sep 03, 2004 1:42 pm

A nice introduction, though it does ramble a bit. The characters are introduced and presented well.

Looking at how long it's been since the previous reviews, and the lack of further chapters, I do hope that you haven't given up on this story, it has a lot of potential...

The Rain · Thu Aug 26, 2004 5:15 pm

I like Theodred's comments. Laughing smiley face

One think that confuses me, is why Eothain is allowed to remain in Eomer's sickroom when his wife and co-ruler is not (even after she has calmed down).

The Rain · Wed Aug 25, 2004 6:23 pm

An interesting start, I look forward to reading more. Don't you dare kill Eomer though.

"quietly pinning a letter to Imrahil and Lothiriel’s brothers" - sorry to nit-pick, but should it maybe read "penning"?

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