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Reviews by Ravenswing

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Heart of a Warden (PG-13)
by aimless.

Chapters [16]
Reviews [55]
Warnings [some violence, some graphic description]
Mon May 15, 2006 8:33 am

Very Happy smiley face I can't begin to tell you how thrilled I am to see you continuing this story. Had you on my list of stories to watch, and even searched for you in various groups, but I had just about given up hope of ever seeing it completed. It just goes to show it pays it hang in there. I can't wait to get caught up! Now that you've found your muse tie 'em up, lock 'em in a room and don't let 'em out until your story is done. A little hostage taking for the sake of creativity is always acceptable!

~Wing~
 
 
Black Death (PG)
by irishelf.

Chapters [19]
Reviews [6]
Warnings [None I hope]
Wed Feb 08, 2006 3:48 pm

I found the story to be somewhat "stilted", "disjoined". You have a tendency to ramble and more effort is needed in the areas of proofreading , spelling and grammar. You are someone I think would do well with a professional beta reader (not some on-line buddy who just 'loves' your stuff, but really only wants to read it before anyone else; but a true beta); someone who could help you with research, grammar, sindarin etc. More effort is needed
 
 
Forgotten Refugee (G)
by Papilio.

Chapters [11]
Reviews [5]
Warnings [None]
Sun May 22, 2005 9:13 pm

Loved this story, which it had more readers and more reviewers. Keep up the great work. We need more stories like this with a real plot and fewer pieces of mindless drivel from those who have never picked up the books and only know the characters through the movies. Well done.