Reviews by ghettoelleth

Middle Earth Journals : Celeborn · Thu Jan 20, 2005 1:39 am

LMAO Forest, that was too funny, I love a good goof. But I do have one question, where oh where can i get my very own Flopsy Goes to Battle plushy????? I've never read a story of yours before, I'll be hunting them down now to see what else you've got going. Thanx for the giggle.

Jesxxx

And in the Darkness Bind Them: Vol I · Thu Jan 20, 2005 1:30 am

“Does your father know you are here?”

Don't answer him, no no no, don't tell him! Dammit! Ya shouldn't have told him. Shocked smiley face

Space, this really is your very finest hour. I once again forgot to push the little alert me thingy so I got to read more chapters this time but dang girl, this is so gooood. Please DO NOT stop. You can write about the Ithilien In n'Out and this one, really you can, just drop out of school or something. I'm diggin' the hell out of this. You know how I like em all dark and gothy!

Jesxxx

The Trees Remember · Wed Jan 19, 2005 8:33 pm

Vannums???? Update please?????? Soon smiley face

A Tale of the Sixth Age · Tue Jan 18, 2005 9:51 am

Oh my Spaceums, you really threw me for a loop with this one. Eomer on the dole? Illegal aliens from Harad, Valariah'sWitnesses. There really is nothing you cannot write about. This was so funny and yet intriguing, and on an entirely different level, heartbreaking. You really are true genius Space. Please don't stop!

Jesxxx

The Trees Remember · Tue Jan 11, 2005 12:13 pm

I forgot to push the add story to my thingy. Now I can say it, I LOVE your Thranduil. This is coming along great Vana, I love it even more here.

Part Two - The Taking of Vanelossë · Sun Jan 09, 2005 1:37 pm

Dang girl, Orophin's smokin'! He's like cool, super self sacrificing hero guy. Who knew? You are improving with every chapter my grasshopper, I'm very proud of you and now going to hurry and "beta" chapter five. Keep em coming honey. Shocked smiley face

Fell Beast · Fri Jan 07, 2005 1:47 am

The lesser wraith moved closer to his master, imploring him mentally.

LMAO Space. This was too funny. Do you know my kids? I hope Pearl knows that as soon as the novelty wears off, he's going to be stuck with doody duty. This was great. I didn't know you had THIS in you as well. You are so talented girl.

The Trees Remember · Tue Jan 04, 2005 1:35 am

Yay Vana, it's even better after beta. I love the elves reactions, especially Legolas to the 'dragon'. I am deleting this part right here vanaknowswhyoops. I can't wait until you get to the parts I haven't read yet, this is such a well written story. Post swiftly my dear.

A Rohan Ghost Story · Mon Jan 03, 2005 12:24 pm

Wow Kat, I am thoroughly impressed by your skill as an esl writer, of Tolkien for heaven's sake. I would have taken the easy road and started with dr seuss or something. You should be very proud of your accomplishment. Oh, and you do Rohan as well, I can't do that. It's a lovely story, well written, you've quite a mastery for the speech. I was wondering if you have your stories beta'd? That might help cut down on the run on sentences and extended paragraphs. Just a suggestion to make writing easier on you. Otherwise, great job.
Jes

Three Arrows to a Broken Heart · Wed Dec 15, 2004 8:43 pm

You have quite a talent for building a story. I liked the relationship between Boramir and Lilliana. I also liked the way you characterized her as willing to take risks for her moral standards. I thought she was lovely. The one thing you need to understand is, there are a lot of people in the fanfic community who have read not only the trilogy, but the Histories, Sil, The Hobbit etc. When we review stories that have their basis in movie canon, we tend to forget that PJ had a very limited amount of time to build 'minor' characters or to explain the motives behind their actions. Because of that, we tend to cringe a little because we 'know' the characters and, to a degree, the motivating factors for their actions. So sometimes its hard for us to see Eomer portrayed as just Theoden's nephew, when in fact, in the books, he was one of Aragorn's closest friends and allies. Or Cirdan as just the elf at the docks in the end of the movie, when he was a powerful Elda in his own right. We know that Denethor was a tortured soul who had tried to match wits with Sauron at great cost to himself and his sons. That little rant aside, it is a nice story and you should keep writing. If you have doubt about a characters background and motives you can always ask someone. lots of people here are very smart and always willing to help.

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