Reviews by ghettoelleth

The Rohirric Job · Thu Dec 22, 2005 6:21 pm

Where's the f*&(*(ing VAN!!!! lmao, wonderful, Space! I knew you could pull it off much better than I could. Me, I went all stupid with it. Very Happy smiley face

This was really fun.

King of the World · Sun Dec 11, 2005 5:30 pm

Holy Crap! Besides the fact that It made my head hurt, that was graphically wonderful. I didn't even read what it was about or that it was a drabble, I just clicked on it cuz I saw your icon and man, I didn't need to read a damn thing, you really conjured up the amazing visuals with this one, Speesh. Excellent stuff. And, I hope something thick finds its way to the one star fairy's dark places. Very Happy smiley face

Suspicions · Wed Nov 09, 2005 7:44 pm

This was indeed very pleasant. I skimmed it the first time and found myself going back to understand what this was. I was pleasantly surprised to find that it was just what it was meant to be. A conversation between two men of different races finding a common bond in their "gift". I loved Elrond in the first person and who doesn't love Faramir. Your vivid portrayal of his physical suffering was very wwell rendered. You have a very pleasant writing style that I enjoyed as well.

Steward's Drabbles · Wed Nov 09, 2005 7:25 pm

How cute. This is a wonderful first try. hehe, mommy gets to be the meany, isn't that the way of things? Very good job for a first time drabble. Don't ya just love the star fairy, always there to encourage and make ya feel good about making the effort...she's a hoot! Pay no mind, the stars mean "f" all to anyone with a brain. Good job my dear and it painted a very sweet picture of day to day life in Ithilien.

Shattered (Drabble) · Sun Nov 06, 2005 2:23 am

Taken as a drabble, half the time I don't even know who I'm writing about until I'm finished. I thought this was clever. I don't know if you meant to do the double, "He found," and that gave me a moment's pause, but all in all, I think I like horse drabbles.

Anticipation · Thu Nov 03, 2005 12:49 pm

Ellie, once again you've managed to go to the heart of Finarfin and portray him so regally, and gloriously with every ounce of dignity he deserves without losing an iota of the depth of his pain and joy as a father. He is tremendously portrayed her with the same powerful ability as in messenger and you manage to deliver the same punch with one relatively small expression of the void left in his life by Aegnor. Speaking of which, how much of a punch does the mention of his refusal of reembodiment until the return of his beloved Andreth pack? Its like a sock in gut almost. As much as I like Crossroads and as much as it has influenced my own decision to write, I have to say Ellie, you have found your calling in Finarfin. Seriously, you own him. I can't even begin to imagine him written any other way. Not that there's a terrible surplus of Finarfin fic. Another excellent job. Oh, and so you don't have to wonder, the waterworks began at the expression of joy watching children play, the little girls reminding him.

The trouble with Pippin · Wed Nov 02, 2005 1:47 am

Ottis, this is really lovely and the rest of the fic was equally quaint, cozy as the closing line, and an oh so fitting way for a Hobbit to express his heart. I really like the way you adapt these stories so seamlessly. I enjoyed reading this immensely, the inherent sweetness of Merry is very touching.

First Night · Tue Nov 01, 2005 6:35 pm

Very lovely Neu. He is so sexy I'm afraid of myself now. hehe. I love her though, she's so great. So brave and touching. The one small glimpse you give into the horror that she's seen is just the perfect touch too. You really evoke the rather sleazy environment of the humans downstairs raising Caine, just all sorts of lovely little nuggets that help round out this wonderful little veggie net, *snort!* Cheese and Rice this is so good. Thanks for the free peek-a-boo. Anytime, just holler.

~g~

Gardener's Yield · Mon Oct 31, 2005 5:10 pm

Wild flowers are pretty enough, but they scatter their seeds as can, come what may. That’s not what a gardener wants.

Ugh. No, we want them to be all that we hate. Stable, well grounded, safe and void of an adventurous bone in their body so we always know just where to find them.

Sam’s had all I’ve got to give, now; oh, not letters and such like but things just as important, and I’ve seen them take root and grow in ‘im.

Aye, blessed.

Once again, with the simplest seeming line you have reached into the very heart of something so profound. Exactly as you did in Ships. You know, I just backspaced on a paragraph. My opinion becomes redundant and shallow. I just adore you Bow smiley face

Aye, blessed indeed.

Thranduil's Son · Mon Oct 31, 2005 5:04 pm

These were very touching glimpses into the private world of father and son. I like the ease with which you depict daily life as opposed to huge events in their history and point out that each, in its own way, is life altering. This impact is especially poignant in the third. Next time consider making it a double drabble, 200 words. I'm sure no one would complain about 50 more words of Thranduil's admiration and love for his boy. My favorite thing when reading about the Legume, I never once pictured Orlando, I saw elves. A major accomplishment as it is the one thing that keeps me from reading too many Legoccentric fics. Finally, your Thranduil is perfect. I'm glad the Rhapster talked you into sharing these.

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