Reviews by Athanya

Sacrifices · Wed Dec 22, 2004 8:15 pm

chapter 3:

very nice, i only dislike how they talk to harshly of eomer, he's a good guy, of course he's all cold... his uncle and cousin were just slaughtered in battle and now his sister is leaving him too. what does lothiriel expect, laughs and smiles?

*athanya

To Be Rohirric · Wed Dec 22, 2004 12:14 am

wonderful! very well written and believable. it makes me want to be rohirric, and have a horse. it also made me feel really bad for eomer, in your story you really show the relationship between he and his cousin and so that really lets you feel the sense of loss that he himself must have felt after loseing his beloved cousin. very nice, keep writing.

*athanya

Sacrifices · Tue Dec 21, 2004 2:22 am

very good, i like the descriptions you use.
question though, is this a beginning to a story or is the whole thing because i think it would be a great beginning.

*athanya

Trust To Hope, Book Two · Wed Dec 15, 2004 6:16 pm

LOVE! i remember when i read your first trust to hope story, i read it non-stop for about two days, i don't think i ate more than an apple, i just couldn't turn away.

i can't help but feel that maybe willa and fenwick would be perfact for eachother, i thought so in the first one too.

i love reading stories about lothiriel and eomer because they are my favorite characters and you write some of the best i have read. congrats on that!

when you finish this one, send it to me... i'm dying to know how it ends.

*athanya

Shadows of the Past · Tue Dec 14, 2004 1:09 am

i loved it! i always enjoy the softer side of eomer. and eomer and lothiriel are my favorite characters to read stories about and there just aren't enough of them being written so i was very pleased to find yours. i believe you mentioned that you wrote another story about eomer and lothiriel, i was wondering if there was any chance that you could send it to me?

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