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End Game (PG)
by isilelensar.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 2] Warnings [none]
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Sun Jul 17, 2005 7:45 am
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That was, uh, sweet... Great drabble!
Silvae |
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Learning Letters (G)
by Lilan.
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Fri Jul 15, 2005 5:55 am
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Personally, even though I have to agree with Nancy in that the girl is a little strange, she didn't make me uncomfortable or anything. Sure, you wonder who she is, etc, but in the course of the story, it seems rather irrelevant. My opinion about her father's disappearance was that he'd been killed in Osgiliath or in a Ranger raid or something like that (which is probably not what you meant at all, but hey ). Maybe you could insert some brief clue as to who her mother is or something. Anyway, this was a very touching story and I liked the way we get to see Nice!Denethor (yes!! I am indeed a convert to the "not-totally-evil-just-tortured-into-madness-Denethor"!).
Good job,
Silvae
PS : I liked the way Denethor never asks for her name. I don't know, that just seems very Denethor-y to me. |
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Steps (NC-17)
by Silvia.
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Wed Jun 22, 2005 10:48 am
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I agree with Nancy - it's really nice (what an awful word! Sorry about that.) but it needs a once-over. Good job though!
Cheers,
Silvae.
PS : Nancy, I'm Silvae. This is Silvia. Don't insult the nice newbies.  |
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A Long, Unexpected Drabble (G)
by ElenaTiriel.
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Wed Jun 22, 2005 10:43 am
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Great!  |
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A Mother's Woe (G)
by Saoirse.
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Wed Jun 15, 2005 8:04 am
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That was absolutely beautiful, especially since Merry and Pippin seem to waltz back during the Scouring and no-one says anything about their disappearance (and most fanfic is about Pip and his dad). Great job!
Cheers,
Silvae |
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My Eyes! My Eyes! (R)
by Alassante.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 25]
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Tue Jun 14, 2005 5:26 am
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That was great!
Did she check Aragorn before she decided to marry him?...
Cheers,
Silvae |
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Annatar's Gift (G)
by SpaceWeavil.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 12]
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Mon Jun 13, 2005 6:28 am
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As Elentari said, this was a great insight, and your Khamûl is perfect. The last sentence is great!
Cheers,
Silvae |
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"Arwen's Gift" and "The Reaction" (G)
by Shanalir.
Chapters [2]
Reviews [ 13] Warnings [None]
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Mon Jun 13, 2005 6:25 am
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Very cute. I like the idea of Arwen being a tomboy. (She must have had therapy since or something. ) Poor Elrond! Office doors should be kept locked at all times . Really good job and bravo for your first posting!
Cheers,
Silvae |
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The Steward's New Clothes (PG)
by GypsieRose.
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Sat Jun 11, 2005 10:33 am
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Oh, this was very funny! Just wondering though, wouldn't Gondor have its own tailor? |
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Faramir's present. (G)
by rohanion.
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Sat Jun 11, 2005 9:34 am
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Very sweet and thoughtful. I like it
Silvae |
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