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"Mysterious Fate" (NC-17)
by Cormak.
Chapters [37]
Reviews [98]
Warnings [minor language, battle scenes, sex between adults]
Thu May 19, 2005 11:02 pm
Okay, I know you haven't updated in a while, but you tend to go longish periods between updates. Still, I'm starting to wonder if you ARE going to keep going with this! It's an absolutely brilliant story. It's so well written, and all the characters are completely alive. Though I must say, I'm disappointed that you're using the movie verse. You obviously have a fairly good grasp of Tolkien's world, particularly your Sindarin (which for once is correct and isn't greyelvish. *grumbles* everyone uses greyelvish now... why? why?) so why did you choose to stick with the movie version? I mean, by choosing that route you're killing of Haldir, cutting Elladan, Elrohir and the rangers out, cutting Imrahil, and generally leaving out significant subtleties that made the original story every thing it was. As much as I understand why Peter Jackson did what he did with the scriptwriting it doesn't make me all that much happier about it. Though fortunately you've managed to portray Pippin and Gimli not quite as much of the idiots the film made them out to be. Neither of them were particularly slow or anything, but the film used them as comic relief, particularly Gimli. *grumbles* Anyway, back to your story. It's amazing, really. I seriously hope you'll continue to write. And I apologize if you're really busy and this seems like I'm nagging you. I understand completely if you're busy and unable to update. But I'm merely hoping desperately that you're not giving this up.

-Eressë.
 
 
Funny...This Doesn't Look Like Vegas... (R)
by Emmess.
Chapters [18]
Reviews [39]
Warnings [none]
Sat Mar 12, 2005 8:52 pm
That was awesome, especially with Elrohir's intervention and Alice getting jealous of Eowyn.... yay! Can't wait for the next update!
 
 
Funny...This Doesn't Look Like Vegas... (R)
by Emmess.
Chapters [18]
Reviews [39]
Warnings [none]
Fri Mar 11, 2005 7:28 pm
.... annnd? UPDATE! You can't stop now! What happens next? Please, I beg you, update.
 
 
Funny...This Doesn't Look Like Vegas... (R)
by Emmess.
Chapters [18]
Reviews [39]
Warnings [none]
Tue Mar 01, 2005 2:53 pm
Wow, this story is really awesome as far as girl-falls-into-middle-earth stories... and you have to admit they do have a certain charm. But this one is particularly well written, the only thing is the fact that English and Westron are different languages, however I understand the need to make them the same within the context of this story, still I think it would have been interesting if she couldn't understand a word... But anyway, the plot is really good and the character Alice is really awesome, plus the twins are my favorite characters so they rock too... I also really like the way you've managed to show a slight mischievous side to the twins without just breaking down and making them totally modern. Also, I'm really glad you haven't done what alot of authors tend to do and just make the twins identical in how they think. They're different people and I'm really glad you've portrayed them as such.

Anyway, thank you soo much for continuing to write, I'm completely loving this fic.

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