Reviews by LegolasLover

Drunk · Tue Jan 17, 2006 4:15 pm

I really liked it but I think there is something missing. Also where are they at? It says since we got here but not where here is. Just curious about that. It wasn't very descriptive but I know this was a drabble so I can't complain. Anyway overall it was good.

Syah's Tears · Thu Apr 15, 2004 7:41 am

Its good I like it so far. What I would like to find is a story like this with a man in ME. I think it would stand out more. But anyway I thought everything was very good. I wish there was more to read right now. Sad smiley face

And just so you know your titles go prologue, ch. 1, ch. 2, ch. 4. Keep writing!

He of the Ring · Wed Mar 24, 2004 8:35 am

I agree with everyone. I would like to read some more of your poems. (if you have more)

Irresolution · Fri Jan 09, 2004 8:39 am

maybe its me (still half asleep) but I found this slightly confusing. what do you mean by "I will go among them and there find, I have no doubt, that we are not so different"? who are them, the people of Gondor? and who are we? Maybe its me but I was alittle confused. other than whose two questions its good.

Here's to a Whole New Yule · Wed Jan 07, 2004 8:31 am

I liked them. they were funny. Laughing smiley face

I only wish that there were more. Very Happy smiley face

An Elf in Aglarond · Sun Nov 16, 2003 10:12 pm

I thought it was very good....no, excellent. It was well written and I can't wait til you finish the next chapter (I know you are writing one). Smile smiley face

The second chapter is good so far (I don't think you should rewrite it).

Jewel of Great Price · Tue Aug 12, 2003 10:50 pm

I was unable to find the phrase "So that's why they call it..." Isn't it suppose to be in the fanfic Confused smiley face

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